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Old 01-20-2005, 02:48 AM   #1
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TRIM
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TRIM, slim, and shiny

I search and rummage

through the vanity

my nails all grimy



Trim the clawlike integument

clip clip snip and clip

get them all in shape

file them, keep them squared



TRIM, slim, and shiny

back into the vanity

the drawer is never tidy

my nails no longer grimy
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Old 03-25-2005, 10:59 PM   #2
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Interesting...don't keep your nails too clean though. We all need a little dirt on our hands to be trustworthy
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Old 10-22-2005, 06:50 AM   #3
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Interesting...don't keep your nails too clean though. We all need a little dirt on our hands to be trustworthy
Okay, I'll keep that in mind. Thanks!
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