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Too Sappy and Sugary Sweet
I don't usually write poems this happy ugh...
Breathing deeply
Falling, spinning
Feeling light-headed
Stomach flutters
Heart floats
A smile on my face
Hoping, wishing
This won't end
Watching carefully
As you get down
On one knee
Ring twinkles, winks at me
Crystal tears
Race down my cheek
Arms encircle you
One word: Yes.
So incredibly happy
Feels like I could die
Wrapped in yor arms
Forever more.
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My aim is to put down on paper what I see and what I feel in the best and simplest way. --Ernest Hemingway
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and I see what you mean about the sentence structure thing.
