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File 13 Got something you were going to throw away, something that just didn't fit or work out the way you planned? Share it here.

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Old 11-27-2004, 08:25 PM   #1
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Are we just friends?
Is that where our relation ends?
Or is it more than we insist?
I'm so confused by this

Yeah...trash it? Or work with it?
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Old 11-27-2004, 10:23 PM   #2
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Work with it, of course. It's sort of hard for me to give an opinion with only 4 lines, but you should work with it and then post more.
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Old 11-29-2004, 12:13 PM   #3
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"I'm so confused by this"

What the hell kind of line is that. Bin it, unless by 'work with it' you mean 'completely change it in every way'.
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Old 11-29-2004, 02:47 PM   #4
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I say work with it, it may have another four lines ending with an imaginative punch line.
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Old 11-29-2004, 04:28 PM   #5
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Pawn,

I think I've fallen in love with harsh honesty...it's absolutely hilarious.

Anyway, that was another math class writing. I swear...I really SHOULD start paying attention in that class...

I don't know...if I get really bored, I'll play around with it...but whatever...

For now, it shall stay in File 13 and not go anywhere...lol
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Old 11-30-2004, 12:41 PM   #6
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Ha! Tis a credit to you that you see the funny side. Pay attention in math class? Don't be foolish: noone's ever managed it, and no one ever will.
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