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Old 05-29-2004, 01:29 PM   #1
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All I Ask (poem)

I like this, but I could never find the words to go on with it... it was written in a moment of desperation and I can't find that feeling anymore, now that things have looked up.

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All I Ask
by Cora Windover

Dear God, I can't change overnight
All I ask is a little time to set things right
I haven't been as selfless as you might have liked
Dear God, the only thing I ask is a little sight

I've always thought the best thing was being strong
I've always thought that being weak was wrong
But letting moments pass me by
Not quite opening my eyes...

Dear God! It's catching up to me
Procrastinating's just not the way to be
All I ask is a little time to set things right
Dear God, I can't change everything in just one night
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Old 07-20-2004, 03:56 PM   #2
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I liked it..it would have better better if it was a little longer, and i didn't really understand what the point of the poem was (i mean like..what it was about...) but it was really beautiful! Good Job!
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