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Old 09-27-2008, 04:55 PM   #1
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Puppet

This goes in file13 because I'm not sure if it's poetry or some lyrics or what. It just sorta came together, and I felt like posting it. Voila...

PUPPET
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Feeling
Like a puppet hunched with broken string
Knowing
I’m shouldn’t recognize these things
Reaching
But nothing’s there to meet my hands
Seeing
What I wish I didn’t understand

Hiding
Protected deep within this shell
Breathing
But recycled air goes down like hell
Breaking
Out; I hate what I’ve become
Wanting
Feelings; I am sick of numb

Shattering
The way you used to see me
Needing
To prove that I can move so freely
Yearning
To cast aside these broken strings
Forgetting
All the dark and useless things
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