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Old 06-29-2008, 07:02 AM   #16
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Within the next weeks, Geordie and Mitsukai hung out in the palace wait for the snow to disappear. They were laughing and joking about things when Mitsukai decided to go get a snack from the kitchen and that is when trouble hit. Lockhart closed the door to the kitchen and grabbed Mitsukai using a drug in a napkin to put her unconuous. Soon Geordie noticed that Mitsukai had not come back and he went to the kitchen finding her gone. "Mitsukai, where are ye?" Geordie yelled in pain of his fiance disappearing then remembered that Lockhart had wanted her and he gathered his men. "They have not gone far find her and bring Lockhart to me to answer for his crimes." Geordie got into his winter clothing grabbed his sword and then jumped on his horse then rode off to find his wife to be with his men. Geordie now had an idea who had her and sent some of his men out looking for her.
Mitsukai layed in the dark tent with Lockhart looking at her hungryly. "Thy tis mine," Lockhart said evilly. Mitsukai spat in his face. "I am not yours. Geordie will find ye and kill ye." Lockhart hit her across the face. Then he jumped on her, pulling off her clothing to get ready to rape her but was distracted when one of his men needed his help with something. Geordie and his tracker were coming upon the Lockhart camp to serve justice to Lockhart for the murders of Mitsukai family. When Lord Lockhart left the tent to get something, Lord Urusai sneaked in and freed his daughter giving her katana so that she could fight her way out. Yoshi, Kyru, Urias, Geordie and his trackers fought there way out of the camp with Lord Lockhart as a captive back to the keep for a proper trial and putting to death. Mitsukai rode with Geordie, she was tired and feeling sick at the time signalling she might be pregnant with Geordie's child. "Thank ye so much, Geordie. Ye will be the greatest husband I have ever had." Geordie smiled at his wife and took her hand. "Ye looks tired. I will have one of your brothers take ye to your room." When they got home Geordie told Yoshi to take her up to their room and let her get some rest. "Aye milord."Yoshi nods and takes his sister upstairs to their bedroom. Yoshi sat with his sister and waited for the midwife to come see Mitsukai. Geordie had ordered the midwife come in and take care of Mitsukai while he dealt with Lockhart. Geordie walked out to Lockhart who was all tied up and bloody from the beatings he was getting. Geordie came to stand infront of Lockhart and took out his sword to behead Lockhart for his murders of Mitsukai parents. "By our laws and the laws of the Japanese ye will die a samurai's death. Ye will also die for what ye did to me wife family," Geordie says angerly. Geordie raises the sword and swings down beheading Lockhart. Geordie then picks up Lockhart's head and hands to his men to display in town square to warn anyone who wishes his lovely wife any harm they will pay with their lives. "Show the towns people what happens if they hurt me wife and her family." Geordie went to see his wife and how she was doing. Geordie was greeted by Yoshi, "She calls for you milord. Lay with her." Geordie puts his hand on Yoshi's shoulder. "Thank you me lad. I will. Ye may go to bed." Yoshi bowed and left the room and went to his own to get rest. Geordie then jumped in bed sending the midwife away so he could rest with his wife to be. Everyone sleep well knowing that Rika was no longer there to hurt his wife and family.
The next day all the planning for the wedding starts taking place. They sat in discussion all day about the chapel, the flowers and the decarations. Mitsukai also asked that her father go to Japan and have kimonos made up for them. Lord Urusai left for Japan with his daughters orders to have the finest kimonos made up this wedding. Other things were to be brought from Japan as well. It took her father one year to get everything and bring it back, while Geordie help his family ready for the day by teaching then the customs that the Japanese had for marriage. When her father arrived with the bridesmaids and groomsmen kimonos and the lanters for the parade to the chapel. While they waited for her father to return Mitsukai had her son, Ryo. Ryo was a little thing with black hair, black eyes and the strength of a Samurai.
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Old 06-29-2008, 07:03 AM   #17
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Glasgow, Scotland 1534 Spring

Finally the day of the wedding came and Mitsukai helped Geordie into his kimono tying it in the back then putting on the obie belt tying it around his waist and in the back When Geordie was ready he helped the groomsmen get ready while Mitsukai ran off to get on her white kimono, make up and hair done. Her father walked her down the ile to marry Geordie. At the alter was a Presbyterian priest and a Shinto priest for each of the the religous backgrounds. Mitsukai father stood between them as the sake was offered to the Geordie first as a prayer was offered then Mitsukai drank and the same thing was preformed. The Presbyterian priest offered a prayer for the couple bless them under one god. The Shinto priest then asked Geordie to offer his commitment to his wife and her family. Geordie turned to his wife and looked at her. "Aabody hear me now. I have sworen me love to mi-wife many times over and over again. Today, I make that commitment until the end of time. I give me life and everything I have to me wife. I will give her things that she desires and need in her life. Hear me wife, I will make ye the most happiest lass in this room and I will never leave ye for I love ye too much. I make this promise before your family so they may witness this promise to ye." Both priest look at one another and ask everyone to bring the offerings to Kami forward. Mitsukai family and Geordie family who is learning for the first time about her culture do so as the Shinto priest offers a prayer over the offerings asking Kami to bless the wedding of the two lovers. After the blessings were given the rings were blessed by the Presbyterian priest then handed one to Geordie who placed it on Mitsukai's hand then Mitsukai did the same thing. Then Geordie kissed Mitsukai as the father step out of the way then the both of them walked out of the chapel together smiling.
After the wedding their was a party in the Geordie's home that had both Scottish and Japanese themes to it. The room had Japanese lanterns hanging in an cross formation with bright reds, golds and whites everywhere. A Japanese style band was playing as everyone entered while the Scots got ready to preform. Mitsukai father had really gone all out for his adopted daughter.When the bride and groom entered everyone was greeting them, wishing them well in their married life. Mitsukai got to meet everyone and she was happy when she could sit down and have her meal. Geordie had encourage everyone to try the food from both cultures. Geordie sat down with his wife and they were drinking sake together which he had learned to drink thanks to her helping him. The meal continued everyone trying different foods like sushi which was famous with the Japanese and chicken which was famous with the Scots. Everyone enjoyed learning new things about each culture. As it got late it was close to midnight before everyone retired. Mitsukai an Geordie went to their wedding bed to have their first night together.
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Old 06-29-2008, 07:04 AM   #18
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My plans for this chapter are the coming of the children. And the love that has grown with time. I also want to show that she will protect him from his enemies in Britian who want him dead because of the children he has had out of wedlock. Does anyone have any ideas?

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Old 06-29-2008, 06:03 PM   #19
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Irish and Scottish in the past use to be able to understand one anothers Gaelic. This is not on history one bite because the time period is not spoken of. I have to listen to my husband on the topic. Now days, Gaelic between Irish and Scottish can not be understood. Gaelic is dying in Ireland and I believe it has died in Scotland.

Have your friend message me and help me out. I apprecate any help you can give.
Gaelic (Gaelige) is alive and well in Ireland. You have no idea what you're talking, or writing, about.
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That is just what I heard. I don't know if it is true anymore.
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Skywalker, none of this changes the fact that your writing needs some serious work. It doesn't matter if you write in Pig Latin, because no one would ever read far enough into the book. If anything, I'd assume that they'd put this back on the shelf after the first sentence.
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Gaelic (Gaelige) is alive and well in Ireland. You have no idea what you're talking, or writing, about.
Thank f**k there's someone else who agrees with me. I was starting to doubt myself...
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