'After Sarah' working title - A romance/ Discovery story. - Page 2 - Writers Forum

Wilem · 04-12-2008, 04:22 PM

Ok thanks. I'll make the second change you suggested. Still can't make any of the changes at the moment though... kind of in-between computers so I just hope this threat stays up long enough for me to be able to copy the story onto my new one. (Lost everyone from my old pc, all my stories, music, everything.). As for the changed line I'll maybe think of something else, the burden thing doesn't fit with me. Sounds a bit... weird. I'll certainly take on your advice but think of a different sentence that means essentially the same thing. Thanks again.

Ungood · 04-12-2008, 05:06 PM

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Originally Posted by Wilem

Ok thanks. I'll make the second change you suggested. Still can't make any of the changes at the moment though... kind of in-between computers so I just hope this threat stays up long enough for me to be able to copy the story onto my new one. (Lost everyone from my old pc, all my stories, music, everything.).

ACK!

Oh man! I am soo sorry to hear that! that happned to me like four months ago my HD up and died... lost all my works... art... stories... everything... crushed me inside and out... I hope you can recovers some of it... !

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As for the changed line I'll maybe think of something else, the burden thing doesn't fit with me. Sounds a bit... weird. I'll certainly take on your advice but think of a different sentence that means essentially the same thing. Thanks again.

It is your story... you have got to do what you feel is best! Always!

Ungood.

Wilem · 04-12-2008, 05:25 PM

Yeah, thankfully I 'dump' a lot of my stories on my friends for them to proof read, give back and tell me what they thought. So I should be able to scrounge by best works back, even of they are only out of date copies. It's still something. I've also go around four different stories on the forums, again not full versions but its better than nothing. Thanks for the concern

. I'm kicking myself for not backing them all up properly, I've played with the idea several times but always decided nothing would happen. -.-'

Ungood · 04-12-2008, 05:44 PM

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Originally Posted by Wilem

Yeah, thankfully I 'dump' a lot of my stories on my friends for them to proof read, give back and tell me what they thought. So I should be able to scrounge by best works back, even of they are only out of date copies. It's still something. I've also go around four different stories on the forums, again not full versions but its better than nothing. Thanks for the concern

. I'm kicking myself for not backing them all up properly, I've played with the idea several times but always decided nothing would happen. -.-'

Feels like a kick in the "Lower Reproductive Area" when this happens... at least you will be able to get back most of your work or your outlines - right?

and thanks for the reminder... I think I am going to go back up my work now...

Ungood

Wilem · 04-13-2008, 04:38 AM

Yeah would seem like a good idea. I've spoken to my closest friends and between them they have around five of my pieces, which is great. So yeah I'll be able to recover most of my stuff

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Ungood · 04-13-2008, 11:26 AM

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Yeah would seem like a good idea. I've spoken to my closest friends and between them they have around five of my pieces, which is great. So yeah I'll be able to recover most of my stuff

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Gotta love proof readers huh?

Glad to hear that you still have your base... I mean some days you just pour your heart into something and trying to get that emotion back is brutal...

Anyway... I am looking froward to seeing what else you have planned...

Ungood

TevenB · 04-14-2008, 09:52 AM

Wilem, your writing is superb and I look forward to reading more. You put so much detail in your stories and its not overdone in the slightest, good job!