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Old 03-08-2008, 05:39 AM   #1
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A bit late - I read this earlier and really enjoyed it.

Couldn't see any obvious mistakes.
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The story is good and definitely interesting You write very well and there is no other comment I can make on that. Although it moves very fast, but I think that's only, because its not a long story.

But other than that I have to say Noctivagus is really cool character!!
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