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Old 03-27-2008, 04:45 PM   #16
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archer: I did fix those adverbs. I agreed with those who mentioned it, and I do like it better now that I fixed it. The sentence suggested by Freedom, though, would've disrupted the flow, so that's what I didn't want to do. I don't mind rewording the sentences. I did reword them, after all. ^^

shraga: Thanks a bunch! ^^
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