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02-24-2008, 05:50 PM
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hmmmm. Very entertaining.
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02-24-2008, 06:04 PM
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Originally Posted by A-L
hmmmm. Very entertaining.
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Thank you A-L. You're too kind. |
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02-24-2008, 06:26 PM
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So I guess a guy just shoving his dick up inside a girl's vagina is an old fad, huh?
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02-24-2008, 06:37 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by SevenWritez
So I guess a guy just shoving his dick up inside a girl's vagina is an old fad, huh?
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02-24-2008, 07:11 PM
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THis is....interesting.
Very graphic.
Slightly..too graphic?
It's like literary porn.
Well it is.
Niiiiiiiiiiice
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02-24-2008, 07:58 PM
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Originally Posted by MusicSoundsBetterWithYou
THis is....interesting.
Very graphic.
Slightly..too graphic?
It's like literary porn.
Well it is.
Niiiiiiiiiiice
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Thanks, MusicSoundsBetterWithYou. I agree, it's rather vivid, but isn't that part of the reason we all write—to illuminate what would otherwise revel in obscurity? |
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02-24-2008, 08:00 PM
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I like it, and I like the erotic genre. I'd really like to see each section more developed, though. You only give a scene of a few seconds, instead of a more drawn out and visually illustrated sexual scene. This is an opportunity to get very sensual. Describe what is seen, heard, felt, smelled, and tasted. I guarantee you it will be 110% sexier.
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02-24-2008, 08:22 PM
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Originally Posted by Caron
I like it, and I like the erotic genre. I'd really like to see each section more developed, though. You only give a scene of a few seconds, instead of a more drawn out and visually illustrated sexual scene. This is an opportunity to get very sensual. Describe what is seen, heard, felt, smelled, and tasted. I guarantee you it will be 110% sexier.
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Caron, thanks for the feedback. The snippets are an experimental device. The idea is to develop them further in accordance with reader interest. My blog is actually set up to aid that process. Also, I felt they would be a more welcome introduction given the eye strain of online reading. But we’re definitely on the same wavelength! |
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