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Old 02-16-2008, 10:11 PM   #1
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Old 02-17-2008, 01:26 AM   #2
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hmmm definitely some potential here. Maybe a bit much at the beginning I think, but it is still quite interesting. Please post more.
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Old 02-17-2008, 01:57 AM   #3
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How do you mean? Could you elaborate on that a little?
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Old 02-17-2008, 02:07 AM   #4
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Well, maybe its just me, but it seems as if you could explain more its like i am missing out on something, or perhaps, something is missing. The story is good, mind you, but it could be a little more clear.
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Oh, could that be cause it's the third chapter?
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Old 02-17-2008, 03:04 AM   #6
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lol, that could be it! But besides that, uh there is nothing wrong with it.
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