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02-14-2008, 08:55 PM
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Fantasy Excerpt
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Last edited by mythologicalrealities : 02-27-2008 at 09:29 PM.
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02-15-2008, 11:51 PM
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I like it. The story reads well, but there is something missing from this story somehow, I just can't put my finger on it. I dunno maybe its just me.  |
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02-16-2008, 06:17 AM
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It's nice but just as A-L try making it more understandable (That's a long word!) try saying something else in the beggining cuz i think a story cant start like that, or this is not the first chapter? well try whatever you want
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02-16-2008, 05:06 PM
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Nah, this is an excerpt from it.
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02-16-2008, 07:46 PM
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well post more please, seems like there is a lot to be told here and i would like to read it.  |
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02-16-2008, 08:08 PM
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It looks good please post more so we can understand more. I am a little confused about it too.
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