Rynash

yeah but changin some of chap one so it wont be anythin like it trust me

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Damian_Rucci

ok I'll hold you to it post more when you write it, if you will

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Rynash

ofc will take a while jus now as im revising for prelims at skl :S

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hybridmerc

well to be fair, you could easily tweak it so that it went off in a completely different direction than bleach followed, after changing the descriptions and all. If you are having trouble, you should take the bleach anime archetype (think thats thet word) and brainstorm what COULD have happened, besides most animes involving this kinda power have the same KINDA thing happen in the first episode

DavidGil

Apologies for bumping this, but I wanted to thank whoever grey repped me for giving the critique I did when I see no-one else even attempted to help him with grammar in previous threads.

I'm sorry I didn't leave a constructive comment such as: It's good, keep it up!

Or:

There's a few grammatical problems. (without even attempting to point them out.)

I could have highlighted the good parts sure, but I don't take back anything else I said. At least I said to keep writing and that it took time.

I wanted to get that off my chest anyway.

Edit: And no Rynash, I don't think it was you. I have a good idea who it was. I'll make a note not to view your threads.

I don't care about rep too much either. But it's nice to know how others feel about your posts, especially when you take a long time.

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