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01-30-2008, 10:39 PM
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Intro to my novel about shamans and demons
Hi,
This is the intro to my novel. Any criticism would be greatly appreciated. And I will gladly reciprocate, if I can be of help.
All the best,
Andrew
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REMOVED BY THE BOARD OF HEALTH
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01-31-2008, 05:40 AM
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it's well written and it's easy to see wat you're sayinng, but it's not exactly a 'page turner'. mebbe it's just too complex for me to scan it all over with. mebbe is because im tired, its dark, my brain isnt workig and the words seem fuzzy that its not readable. who knows eh?
change the font to an easier on the eye size. continue 2 post
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02-01-2008, 11:26 AM
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Hehe, er there isn't anything to read on either post... sooooo yeah great
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02-03-2008, 04:56 PM
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wow lol nothin there
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