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Old 01-30-2008, 06:43 PM   #1
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Shamans and Demons - Intro to my novel
Hi,
This is the intro to my novel. Any criticism would be greatly appreciated. And I will gladly reciprocate, if I can be of help.
All the best,
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Old 01-30-2008, 09:12 PM   #2
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Write about nine or ten more paragraphs, and then we'll talk.
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I would have prefered to see the first chapter as a whole?
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Sorry. Every time I attempted to post I received a database error from this forum. At the time I walked away from the computer there was no post. Now there's this, and another attempt with the full thing. If you have a moment, please check it out, just above this one.
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