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salmon the creative · 01-27-2008, 05:18 PM

"Well that was quick. Sixty seconds you were gone. Im guessing you didnt bother to explore a little?" Oscar said as he saw Troy and Tanya suddenly apparate into the room. "Well i wasnt expecting you to rescue her so i take my hat off to you for that one"

"Never mind that! You gave Malogov the peltio pathway and allowed him into the future! You stupid insolent fool! Dont you realise what oyu have done?" Troy bellowed as he threw the jewellry box onto the ground and lunged for Villiers' throat. "He is going to attack Arconvale from the future and theres nothing anyone can do to stop him!"

" I had no choice Mr. Angelo! If i hadnt have gave it to him i would be lying in a casket right now with a sword hanging from my spine. And if that had happened he still would have took it!" Oscar replied as he turned back around and gazed out of the window once more. "I didnt know what else to do..."

"Well this box will not be used any more..."

Troy grabbed the peltio pathway from the ground and raised it high into the air. Oscar saw what he was doing and attempted to snatch it from his grasp but he was too late. The box came thundering to the ground with incredible speed and strength and the second it hit the floor, a blinding silver light engulfed the room blinding all the occupents and then the small box caught fire.

"Now lower that ladder so we can get out of here!" ordered Troy. He pointed his finger at the window where the ladder lay and then indicated to his sword. "If you dont, i will make sure my sword decapitates your head right now"

"Dont you realise what you have done?! Fine, there may be one less method of transport to the future but theres hundreds, possibly thousands, more pathways out there! You have just made things a thousand times worse!" shouted Oscar. He grabbed the lever that allowed access to the ladder and pulled it viciously.

"One more thing before we go. I want Jason to be the new guard captain of Arconvale. The last thing they need is a stupid fool like you ruling their town!"

"If you think im going to stand by and watch that idiot..."

Troy didnt give Oscar time to finish his sentence as he threw himself towards him and pressed his sword so hard on Villiers' neck that blood trickled down the edges slightly.

"This is whats going to happen. You will resign as guard captain and immediatley give your role to Jason. After that, you will burn this torture house to the ground." he whispered into Oscars ear menacingly. "If you dont, i will hunt you down and kill you like you deserve. Im giving you the chance to redeem yourself because im not like you - i have morals"

"Well, Mr. Angelo, you certainly know how to drive a hard bargain. Fine. I will do what you say. But listen to me when i say this and remember it always: i will make you wish you had never been born and when i do, you will lose everything!" Oscar warned cruelly as he pushed Troy off him...

animator · 01-28-2008, 11:28 AM

how long is each chapter in the first book, ruffly.

salmon the creative · 01-28-2008, 04:17 PM

dunno about 2500 words for short ones and 4000-5000 for longer ones although its hard to tell because im handwriting it

salmon the creative · 01-28-2008, 04:17 PM

dunno about 2500 words for short ones and 4000-5000 for longer ones although its hard to tell because im handwriting it

salmon the creative · 01-28-2008, 04:18 PM

I couldnt tell you because i hand-wrote it and im hand writing the second one. I find that my creativity excels when im hand writing things

salmon the creative · 01-28-2008, 04:18 PM

I couldnt tell you because i hand-wrote it and im hand writing the second one. I find that my creativity excels when im hand writing things

salmon the creative · 01-28-2008, 04:21 PM

I couldnt tell you because i hand wrote it. Im also hand writing crimson blood 2 because i find that i write better when im writing from a pen instead of a keyboard

salmon the creative · 01-28-2008, 04:21 PM

I couldnt tell you because i hand wrote it. Im also hand writing crimson blood 2 because i find that i write better when im writing from a pen instead of a keyboard

salmon the creative · 01-28-2008, 04:25 PM

sweet jesus! I lagged REAL bad there im sorry

salmon the creative · 01-28-2008, 04:25 PM

sweet jesus! I lagged REAL bad there im sorry

salmon the creative · 01-29-2008, 12:48 PM

im having a few problems with this website anyone else having issues?