Gabriel Gray

Haha, my own fault for going overload and writing 10 pages in one night. I tell you what, i'll create a prologue for this story and you could review that perhaps? In all honesty what i've posted on here hasn't been (in my very unmodest opinion) the best of my ability.

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Gabriel Gray

Just read the 4th book on 'the wheel of time' and i'm considering rewriting the whole thing, just need to find the time to create different races and shiz

(was this forum down for a bit?)

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Something i've been working on for a while now, it has a slow start but please read it and comment - It would mean a lot to me

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Gabriel Gray

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/7...artenedbu6.jpg

It just shows a red box for me, so gave both links just incase, just a little map i drew of the countries ages ago, thought it might help people understand the random movements of the characters.

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DavidGil

Hey Gabriel, just thought this might be a handy link for you in terms of making maps.

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Gabriel Gray

i done it when i was like 15 i think, lol. This has been an idea of mine for ages, atm i've filled in the towns throughout the lands, now i'm going to make a list lords/lady's for all the towns/cities, along with kings queens etc.

im doing the whole kit n caboodle for when i rewrite this (which won't have any elves n stuff in, totally new, totally my idea etc)

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Something i've been working on for a while now, it has a slow start but please read it and comment - It would mean a lot to me

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Gabriel Gray

Right, anybody actively interested in this story? I'm rewriting it (fully) in a totally different world, if so give me the thumbs up.

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Something i've been working on for a while now, it has a slow start but please read it and comment - It would mean a lot to me

http://www.writingforums.com/fiction...ml#post1211308