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12-19-2007, 04:50 AM
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12-19-2007, 07:03 AM
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reminds me of constantine, you done more of it? would like to see who this eva character is  |
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12-19-2007, 10:18 AM
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Ah very cool, typical of the angry mob to go after the only one that can help them haha.
Well I'd love to read more too, have you written any more?
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12-19-2007, 02:36 PM
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cefor, thankyou for your comment as always. Anywa, you're right. People tend to destroy things they don't understand, right? I'm writing this whole thing as I go along (as I'm doing with most things these days) so I shall definitely try to do more.
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hello gabriel! (heroes fan by any chance? lol) i started reading your own story (it has elves in it too! ) but I need to finish it... i have so little time these days. And I've never seen constantine but it sounds good!
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12-19-2007, 04:34 PM
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Cool, yeah people do tend to destroy things they don't understand....
Gabriel's story is good, you should definately read it.
P.S Constantine is a great film!
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12-19-2007, 05:32 PM
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I've been told my compliments are strange, i guess they might be.
Constantine is pretty much one of my top 20 films, has keanu reeves in it. Storyline is pretty awesome, some guy who as a teenager could see all these demons/angels monsters etc, in the end slit his wrists and died for 5minutes irl, but spent ages in hell etc. when he was resussatated he spent his life trying to make sure he would not go to hell by 'deporting' these demons back to hell etc, you really have to watch it, might give you some more ideas for your story.
I'd like to see the next part of your tale, also thanks for taking the time to read mine  |
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12-22-2007, 06:18 AM
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12-22-2007, 07:39 AM
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Interesting, I looked at the picture, and you missed a line out 
Under her right leg should be another part of her left leg.... otherwise she got one hell of a twisted leg.... hehe
It's better than what I could ever draw though...
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12-22-2007, 09:05 AM
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oh YEAH haha. she obviously has elastic legs!
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12-23-2007, 12:00 AM
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I really like Eva! Her being mysterious and innocent like. I can already feel that this leads into another archetype of the mysterious girl secretly holding an immense and strange power.
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12-23-2007, 08:58 PM
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Well, so far so good. I have not looked at alot of elf books, mostly paranormal... but I think this is forming well. She looks to be an innocent girl, I hope that you can make her a little mysterious besides the language. I'm looking foward to seeing what lerks in the forest, and what is bringing her out of it to find him. Good luck and happy writing
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12-26-2007, 01:48 PM
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The beginning reminds me of the movie Constantine were only certain people can see demons, but they're everywhere.
Other then that small detail the story itself is interesting and I look forward to reading more
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12-27-2007, 02:18 PM
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So far, this is a good story. May we have more?
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12-27-2007, 07:53 PM
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Please sir, can we have some more?
I liked the latest addition, even though things moved a bit too quickly for my liking, rar rar monsters rar rar careful rar rar lets run rar rar take him away rar rar hey im a elve
I just pointed out my own downfall here also, ouch  |
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12-31-2007, 04:25 AM
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yeah i know, i rushed the last bit didn't I? If I were writing this as a "proper" story, I'd fill it out more, but I'm only doing this for a bit o' fun.
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