Id personally like to read more about the magic of the place... that seems the most important part of your world... I guess its based around the elements, but you havent actually told us this. If you have something more from this world, a longer piece i mean, then please point me in the right direction to be able to read it
The characters are good... and I liked the proffessor part. Quite amusing.
Keep up the good work,
Cefor