Foreman1984

I post on here tonight somewhat hesitantly, the reason being that the sea of information that is the Internet seems overwhelmingly exposed to being copied, mimicked. But as i thought about this, and have read many works on these forums it became clear that ideas are built upon foundations, and as such its not so much the content (although important) but more the writers creativity and style that makes a book.

EDIT: Taken off for massive rethought

Foreman1984

Oh a quick niote, im not entirely happy with the last paragraph, but thought id get feedback first to see if im wasting my time writing at all

Knocking

It's good! Though not particularly attention-grabbing. Please write or post more, it's interesting. Roe sounds awesome:

"Firstly, don’t sneak up on me, im an old man and I don’t like surprises!"
Ha ha!

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"We don't read and write poetry because it's cute. We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion. And medicine, law, business, engineering, these are noble pursuits and necessary to sustain life. But poetry, beauty, romance, love, these are what we stay alive for."

--John Keating, Dead Poets Society

Foreman1984

Iv written 12 chapters to date, well more than that, but 12 that im fairly happy with as drafts. The first chapter is a lot more intensive than the prologue, thanks for your swift comments If people are interested i may post up the first chapter soon