{*`Where Can I Find Love`*} - Writers Forum

BabyFresh_06 · 06-02-2007, 02:51 PM

Note to readers: The way that Kamara talks is how I wrote it, it's not a typo...hope you enjoy reading

"Lord, please give me the strength to go through this day as anyother and let harm not trouble me as much, and try to make the best of it, and last but not least stay with me and my little sister as you have always, I love you." M'Kayla said in her head as she got out of her bed to go get her little sister ready for school as well as herself.

M'Kayla was a pretty little thing only 14 years old, she had honey-colored skin with green eyes and dark brown hair that stopped at her shoulders. She basically raised herself and her little sister seeing on that their mother was quite unfit to even be a mother.

"Kay I'm hungwe can you fix me shomething to eat pleashe?" whinned Kamara as Kayla was getting her ready for school.

Kamara was Kayla's 6 year old sister, when you looked at her you'd think she was a younger version of the singer Mya. She had long curly hair with grey eyes and she had a soft voice.

"I'll see what I can find in the kitchen for us to eat, o.k." replied Kayla knowing that there was nothing in the whole household for them to eat. "Get your stuff ready for school and come on" said Kayla finishing off her sentence.

As Kayla and her sister made their way downstairs to the kitchen, they spotted their mother on the couch asleep. They walked past her and made their way to the kitchen where Kayla gave her sister a half-eaten pack of crackers, a piece of day old bologna, and a glass of water.

"Kay, I'm shtill hungwe" continued whinning Kamara.

"Yes" said Kayla while walking towards her little sister and kneeling down in front of her. "But I promise we'll go out for some pizza o.k., now come on we better get going before you miss your bus."

On their way out the door their mom woke up, "Your not gonna give mommy a hug before you go to school Mara?" questioned their mother in a jokingly manner.

"Oopsh, shorry mommy" said Mara while running towards their mother with a big grin on her face. "Here it go shorry."

"Mmm be a good girl in school now you hear me" said their mother while hugging her tight.

"Alright mom that's it I have to get her to her bus stop and then I have to get to school my-" Kayla was cut off before getting to finish her sentence.

"What did I tell you about that word?. I told you I'm not your mother I didn't even want you, you were a mistake and you ruined my life" yelled their mom to Kayla.

"Come on now Mara" yelled Kayla in the calmest voice she could while trying to hold back the tears of the words her mother just yelled at her.

~*Occulence*~ · 06-02-2007, 04:00 PM

kind of short, but I like it so far. One thing that confused me at first was immediately changing Kamara's name to Mara. I know why you did it, but you could have said that Mara was nickname, when she was called that for the first time.

Renos Babe · 06-03-2007, 12:04 AM

yea i liked it well writen, and very interesting. Admittedly short and I would love it if you posted some more.

BabyFresh_06 · 06-04-2007, 07:34 PM

sorry but most of my adds are short but there is one add that will be extremely long but here is the next add

Kayla and Mara just walked out the door walking her little sister to her bus, she didn't say anything was to upset, but really there was no reason to be upset she heard it on a regular basis. They walked to the bus stop and just before the bus came Mara broke the silence.

"Kayla" said Mara while tugging on her jacket "What did mommy mean when she shaid that you weren't her kid and you were a mishtake?" she questioned.

"Nothing, she just didn't get enough sleep last night and she was just talking out the side of her mouth" replied Kayla trying to make Mara believe the lie she just told her.

"Oh o.k." answered Mara not knowing that Kayla was lying to her.

"Well there your bus is give big sis a hug and a kiss goodbye" Mara did as she was told, she made her way on the bus and Kayla watched her off, waved and blew a kiss at her.

As Kayla walked to school those words of her mother kept replaying in her head "I'm not your mother I didn't even want you, you were a mistake." Tears started to fill her eyes, when she heard a honk behind her, she turned and seen a balck BMW with black tinted windows and black 20" rims. The car pulled up alongside of her and let the back window down

" Come on girl get in the car" yelled out her best friend Mon'et.
Kayla walked to the car and got in the backseat with Mon'et. Mon'et was Kayla's best friend; her origins included Indian, Peurto Rican, and African American. Despite this, if you'd seen her walking down the street, she could pass as a white girl no doubt, with skin light and soft as silk.

"Hey girl, I seen you on your way to school so I decided to have my brother stop and pick you up" said Mon'et. Her brother looked at her through his mirror and she looked back at him.

"Hi" said Kayla politely. "What's his name?" asked she asked.

"It's Syre" relied Mon'et. Syre was Mara's older brother he was kind of a caramel and brown complexion, with bobby valention hair and nice sideburns he was 17 years old he was far from dumb he graduated high school last year at he age of 16, he was a MAJOR player/pimp and he never ever fell in love he looked at girls as a toy because they gave him anything that he wanted.

"What's the matter?"

"Nothing" said Kayle lying.

"No tell me" Mon'et insisted.

Kayla looked up and seen Mon'et's brother looking at her through his mirror
"Well actually it's my ma" Kayla said while tears started to build up in her eyes.

"Did she say it again?" said Mon'et surprised.

"Yea she did but this time it was in front of Mara and she didn't understand and I didn't want to tell her"

Kayla just broke into silent tears "It'll be o.k" assured Mon'et while comforting her and patting her back

"And I need to braid some hair so I can afford to feed my little sister tonight" she continued crying in Mon'et's arms

"Umm here ya'll go and nice meeting you Kay" said Syre letting them know that is was time for them to go into school "Mon'et wait in here for a minute I need to talk to you"

"Hold on Kayla my bro need to talk to me, what is it" asked Mon'et

"Umm what's up with yo friend?"

"What you mean?"

"I mean, is she taken or what"

"Boy you need to stop she is not the girl that you're used to talking to and besides she's only 14" with that said Mon'et walked off.

"What was that about?" asked Kayla

"Nothing he just wanted to know if he should pick me up from school" said Mon'et lying.

"Well I'm bout to go to class" said Kayla

"Alight catch you in lunch alight"

"Alight then" said Kayla ending the conversation.

BabyFresh_06 · 06-18-2007, 07:47 PM

even though there hasen't been any comments here is the next add I hope this will get some recognition

"Hey Kayla" is all you hear through the halls as she walk them to get to her class "Hey" Kayla replies to all all of her schoolmates.
Kayla isn't the type to stop in the hallway and talk to her friends she doesn't believe that everyone that speaks and waves at her is actually her friend. The only reason her and Mon'et are bestfriends is because Mon'et used to go through the same thing as her. That was until her brother moved out of their mother house and she(Mon'et)moved in with him(Syre). She is all about school work so that she can get a good education and get out of her mom's house.

"Hey Kayla do you have the answers to last night's algebra homework?" whispered a boy behind her.

"Yeah I got 'em, why, do you want them"

"Yeah"

"Didn't I tell you that I wasn't giving you my notes anymore"

"But Kay-" pleaded the boy.

"Naw, I was only playing here you go" said Kayla giving him the paper.

"thank you"

Kayla goes through school the same way doing all her work in class and paying attention and getting a lot of attention from the students in her school and notice from the teachers.

At lunch.

"Hey girl" yells Mon'et from across the lunchroom.

Kayla walks over to Mon'et and they go and sit down at a table

"Umm guess what" says Mon'et excitedly.

"What is it" said Kayla excitedly mocking Mon'et.

"Well my brother has this friend that needs his hair braiding and if you braid his hair good enough you might get up to 30 or 50 dollars"

"Oh for real" said Kayla excitedly "becuase I promised Mara that we'd go out for pizza tonight"

"So it's on for tonight huh"

"How do you know?"

"His dumb ass called me during class and asked"

"Yea, but uh what time shall I be over your house"

"About 4:30 or whatever"

Kayla went on with her school day then after school had let out she met up with Mara.

"So are we on the way to my house now?"

"Naw I have to go and get my little sister from the bus stop then I'll be over there alight"

"Alight then I guess I'll just walk with you to go and get pretty girl"

The walk there they just played around they arrived at Mara's bus stop just in time as the bus pulled up Mara practically ran off of the bus

"Hey sister N'et" said Mara while hugging her.

"Hey pretty girl" replied Mon'et whilie putting Mara on her back and giving her a piggy back ride.

"What did you do today in school pretty girl" asked Mon'et

"Nothing we wrote some more sentences and I need some help with my homework because I don't quite get it".

"O.k. I'll help you while we're eating pizza" said Kayla as they arrived in front of Mon'et's house.

Inside of the house.

the next add is long just like you all have been waiting for