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I like it but I agree with Azmakna on the point that sometimes it feels drawn out or akward. (Don't know if you fixed this, only enought time to read first two chapters...)
You don't have to give an explanation for everything...as long as what you're thinking is implied then we can figure it out.
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-Xtlk - My Hopeful Book!
A shattered daimond does not mend,
Yet pieces of glass are fused again.
The purest hearts are the ones that break,
The guarded and stained are the ones that remain.
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