SPELLS - Writers Forum

Ozoneent · 05-19-2007, 06:06 AM

hey there,

i'm a young Nigerian writer with a plot for a specific series, titeled SPELLS: it is the tragic journey of a wizard in the far future (Flying cars and houses) in another dimension; as he and his rock loving, science geek friend (a girl) try to stop the same wizard orginizatioon which detroyed the wizards village from getting a book called spells (Spells is the altimate wizard book) and bringing the world to an end; along the way they meet two others a black wizard and his cousin a hot femal witch, with te four now caught in the middle of what is called the wizarding civil war
with over ten wizard families going against each other

Renos Babe · 05-19-2007, 06:15 AM

sorry dude but to me it seems very similar to Harry Potter, post it and we'll see, other than that i really can't say anything about it.

Krim · 05-19-2007, 02:33 PM

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sorry dude but to me it seems very similar to Harry Potter, post it and we'll see, other than that i really can't say anything about it.

...What? How in the hell is that similiar to Harry Potter?

Ozoneent · 05-20-2007, 02:39 PM

There are a lot of stuffs i failed to mention, or you didn't get to read: the story is based in the future, his father, mother and Brother are actually the leaders of the LEDGE as the dark walker, the wisher and the shadow killer, who destroyed their village, and a book is causing civil war that would bring the end of all witches, how the hell is that like Harry Potter?
help me out here anyone. if you are intrested please tell me and i'll send you a more fufilling explanation of the whole SPELLS script

Azmakna · 05-20-2007, 02:49 PM

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Originally Posted by Krim

...What? How in the hell is that similiar to Harry Potter?

lol... that is word for word what i thought until i scrolled down and thought, that is word for word what i thought... i'll stop now.

it sounds promising.

Renos Babe · 05-20-2007, 03:09 PM

like i said post it and prove me wrong.

Rynash · 05-20-2007, 06:17 PM

ithink it sound lyk a pretty good idea post it

Ozoneent · 05-21-2007, 12:01 PM

i would either be putting the synopsis and characters profile for download here or you could send me your mail address and i would send it to you. so if you are intrested, we would start work as soon as possible on the whole thing

Cefor · 05-21-2007, 03:02 PM

Aye, sounds interesting. Though be careful to avoid clichés and what not.....

Cefor

Ozoneent · 05-21-2007, 03:45 PM

Here goes, this is a brief synopsis on SPELLS, if you want more on it, you would have to contact me on my email addy (katoon_its_mii@yahoo.com)

waiting 4 ya reply

invisible ink · 05-21-2007, 05:33 PM

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Originally Posted by Krim

...What? How in the hell is that similiar to Harry Potter?

Haha, I have to agree. The only thing similar to Harry Potter is the presence of wizards. And witches. lol. But it sounds very interesting! I think you should write it and see how it goes. What audience is it geared toward?

Ally

Ozoneent · 05-22-2007, 03:16 PM

spells synopsis is hopefully attached to this reply. intrested people should read and reply, as i wish to find writers and artists intrested in working on the piece with me

Peace

Obi

Ozoneent · 05-29-2007, 09:42 AM

you are expected to reply if you are intrested iin working on it (that is if you are an artist) am still waiting

Krim · 05-29-2007, 03:51 PM

Why...is it an attachment?

Ozoneent · 06-11-2007, 01:35 PM

SPELLS
Episode 1: The Fall & The Rebirth
In a galaxy far far away……
AWAY FROM HERE:
The college building was always a heart ache to him, but he had no option than to always walk into it. His name is MUZ-just twenty-one-he was dressed in a casual shirt and jean and was blessed with long black hair. He had been told that his future, the one to which he saw himself as a Nuclear scientist, was only possible if he went through these doors until he was ready for his one year verdict-erium (a year of decision).
This day, a normal day in his life, was the last day he was ever going to go in and come out of the college doors, as it both brought sad memories that made him wish he wasn’t leaving--
"What’s with you?"
A punk-girl-nineteen-years old, walks up to Muz, and holds him on his shoulders as she manages to catch a glimpse of his eyes
"You’ve been acting weird all morning, blanking out on me"
"Sorry about that Felisha--"
FELISHA HEDWAY, his best friend for over ten years, loud mouthed-but one of the smartest people you could ever meet. She had always dreamt of becoming a mechanical engineer, but was forced to follow her father’s footsteps and become a computer engineer
"I always felt you’ll be glad to leave this dump?" Felisha continued
"I am glad that today is my last day here, but I’m beginning to have second thoughts about my future. My mother told me today that, I should always find my happiness in the dept of any darkness"
"That doesn’t sound like a career advice to me"
"It’s just that, every time my mum gives me an advice--"
"—something strange happens. Like the time--"
"I don’t think I would like to reminisce on such time Felish"
"You are no longer fun Muz-I mean it. When was the last time you got into a fight?"
"You mean got beaten up?"
"You see my point? You are no longer positive. But on a brighter note--"
"I think you should stick to your PDA honey"
Muz said with a smile as he turned to see who everyone called his boss, Frankie Supsi, school sky ball champ and arch enemy of Muz. Frankie usually walked with a bunch, and while some didn’t like what he did, walking with him seemed like the only means for them to get popular.
"Frankie, I think you should cut Muz a little slack here-it’s after all his last day" a lanky member of his gang said
"Shut up Muckie, I would squash the long-haired-girly-boy in every way I can, cause I would never get such a chance again"
"Hey!"-Felish butted in-"You are lucky Muz isn’t in a fighting mood, or you’ll have been dead by now"
"Felisha, you are not helping as usual---"
Hours later, Muz and Felisha are on their way home. It could be told from Muz’s face that he was beaten by Frankie for a long time, but as they walked, his face kept getting better and better, until it was all healed.
"That’s why they keep doing it. you know? They think you are some kind of super hero"
"That’s charming and thanks for the back up"
"Come on Muz, am a girl in case you failed to remember and I am just smart. Not the kind you’ll like to take for your round the world adventure"
Muz didn’t have any reply, so he just shrugged
"Besides Muz, I wouldn’t want to soil the next biggest rock artist now would I?"
"Have you decided?" Muz tries to change the topic, being that he hated recalling he was what he was.
"Changing the topic again I see. Does your mother know you don’t like the fact that you are a--"
"Felish, please"
"Hey! I’m home. I’ll talk to you later and then maybe you could try to convince me that you are better of a nuclear scientist than a--"
The next instance Felisha was in her room, she looked shocked for a while, then rolling her head and screaming like she was angry with something, she picks up her phone and dials a number…
Muz Phone rings and he looks at it-seeing Felisha on the screen, he puts it back into his pocket and walks slowly with his hands in his pocket, like he was thinking about a lot of things.
HOME:
"It’s not possible. MOTHER!!!!!"
Muz stands on what looks like the ashes of a place that had been burnt to the ground, with different colours of smoke leaving the ground in different areas, and the cloud getting clear again. Muz falls to his knees, looking around, confused to death, as his eyes told the tales of a thousand lost questions. Struggling, he manages to get up and run towards where it seems he once lived, as the ground littered with dead people made it almost impossible for him to walk without falling. When he finally got to where he felt his home was, he dropped his bag and fell to the ground crying bitterly. The next moment, he heard something moving, turning around he hoped it was someone he knew, but he only saw an old man hooded and dressed as a wizard, walking towards Muz, and what seemed liked the remains of Muz’s home.
"Are you a CRESDIA clan member son?"
"Wha-wha-" Muz couldn’t hold back his tears, as some of the ashes had already made half of his face completely black
"You must have managed to not been home. My name is Eldrascu-FRECSUM, elder and leader of the Ifil Clan"
"The Ifils? Why didn’t they help us?"
"My child, no one can help you when LEDGE comes after you"
"Le-Ledge?"
"You don’t know Ledge? I guess your clan where trying hard to suppress their witchcraft and live a normal life of humans, so you would hardly know them"
"I want to find them, I want to know why?"
"Ledge is a dangerous group bent on finding and using the book SPELLS to bring about the end of the world"
"Spells is a myth"
Muz said in anger as he stubbornly got up-turning and swinging his hands, as the remaining rubble flew away leaving a trunk on the ground, with the name MERZO DUNZKA written boldly on it
"I know you are hurting son, but this isn’t a journey you can go about on your own, you’ll need guidance and training, especially recalling that you can’t use a true attack spell"
"My clan was annihilated for a simple book? I must find out the true reason behind this"
"Child, apart from the book, your clan held the staff of Dren, which was the key to a portal between this world and the demon world. Ledge must have wanted the staff for that purpose, to possibly slow any resistance down"
"I need to go after them! I want to know where they left my parents body!! Where can I find them?!"
"Be calm son--"
"WHERE CAN I FIND THEM!!!!"
Frescum says something Muz couldn’t understand as he immediately found himself souring through the air and landing hard on his back, in the middle of the central shrine, which was the only place that wasn’t scratched during the massacre
"I didn’t think that Ledge would have respect for such a place"
"Why did you do that old man!!"
"Be a little more respectable and humble, and you could go a long way into becoming a fine wizard son"
Frescum said walking, he picked an-old-bag, waving his staff around it, as it immediately turned into a black bag pack and holding it, he sat on the Eldrascu-of-the-Cresdia’s sit
"Son, when you are through mourning, come to me and I’ll open your eyes to why you would need to awaken your own spirit"
"I don’t want to be--"
"Does it look like you have a choice now? You are so lost in your clans illusion that you can’t even see a simple push spell"
"I can cast a--"
Muz tries casting a spell, but finds himself in front of Felisha’s house, and that was where he planned on sending Frescum, who appeared behind him smiling as they both reappeared in the temple
"Is that it? A transfer spell? That was even slower than an ilis-ten-year old"
Muz gets mad and tries to hit Frescum, as each time, something stopped his hands pushing them back, but Muz continued to try, but each time, the same thing happened, as Muz gets angry and screams
"FELSTANIO EARSTI!!" (Fesltanio Earsti-Move the earth)
Which was an earth moving spell as the ground broke underneath Frescum but Frescum failed to reach the ground; then by doing the same spell, Frescum makes a stunned Muz fall into the open ground, as it closes and clasped his neck, leaving only his head above the ground
"Have respect for the temple, and it would honour you son. Calm your spirit and you would find away to free yourself, for I didn’t only do a Fesltanio I also backed it up with a temper control spell. So until you are calm enough to learn, you would not be free; and seeing that time is against us--"
Frescum walked up to him, pointing the tip of his staff on his fore head and whispering soething, as a blue light moves through the staff into the head of Muz causing Muz to slip into a world where he could grieve about his pain
"Until you are through grieving, you shall remain in there"
AWAKEN CHILD:
Muz’s eyes opened slowly, as he saw Frescum sleeping, taking a deep breath and looking more composed than before he went to sleep, he closes his eyes, as he is next seen sitting close to Frescum, who moves in shock
"You were snoring and it was quite a pain"
"You are through, I see. Now listen, this bag I give to you, is a special one, and has been in your clan for generations. It is very special because, it follows the needs of the holder. If you need any potion, it gives you the potion, as long as it is in the bag. So you would have to refill the bag and upgrade it from time to time. But whatever potion you need, just dip your hand into the bag and the first one you touch, use it."
"Secondly, you would need to sport a wizard outfit"
"Where would I get one Eldracsu?"
"It seems your father left you his"
Frescum said pointing to the ground, as the trunk with Merzo Dunzka on it appearing before the two and opening, to the sight of a black hooded wizard overall with golden glowing symbols, which ran all through the outfit, (Not a robe, more like a ninja outfit with no mask, but a hood)
"Where this with pride son and you wouldn’t regret it, even for a day. Thirdly, I would need to revive your mind into knowing your basic spells and how to use them; but since they are in you, all I have to do is…"
Frescum stands and waves his staff around, as a set of lights came out from his body and moved around, all entering Muz one after the other, until all eight balls of light were in, causing Muz to fall to the ground.
"I just gave you ninety years of wizardry wisdom from your Eldrascu. It was his last wish that if any Cresdia was left alive he should get this"
"Thank you"
"Go now son. Something tells me I would be very proud of being the one who awakened you"
"Was there any request from the Eldrascu?"
"I think he would want you to accomplish your own dreams, then and only then, can you bother about other wishes of his"
Muz smiled, happy that he was ready to tackle the world and find out why his whole clan was annihilated. He walked and bowed to Frescum, who nods and says
"Bow no more to no man, for you are of the awakened age. I just hope you succeed. I have to go now, my clan needs me to stand by them"
"Goodbye Master Frescum"
"Goodbye Master Muz. One more thing, Allies would go a long way, so look for a trusted ally and you both would, by leaning on each other, get to greater heights"
ALLY:
"So, what’s with the outfit?"
Felisha is seen sitting in front of her house, like one who has been in mourning for over a week, even though Muz had just left her for a day.
"I saw what happened on the news and I was scared that you were dead, and you show up in front of my house wearing a crazy outfit, carrying a funny black matching bag and smiling like you just won a lottery"
"It’s my new look. You like?"
"How are you coping? I hope this hasn’t gotten you mad or something? Cause I know a very good helping place"
"Felisha, I’m fine. I’m going to find the people who did this though"
"You look too calm for someone who lost his whole clan; are you sure it wasn’t some kind of witch prank on us?"
"Felisha; I came to ask you to go on an adventure with me, I’m going to find a wizard cult known as LEDGE, and I need help from my only trusted ally"
"Are you nuts?! I have a year to think about my future after I just finished having a big fight with my dad and you expect me to just up and leave with you, to hunt wizards? Only a crazy person would agree to such an offer--"
Minutes later
"This is so cool, Muz. We are actually going to get top test some of my gadgets, like the demon buster and the hover crafts and the--"
Felisha and Muz are walking, as She is wearing a white and red mixed punk top and jeans, with a chain hanging from one side and a bag on her back, which looked high tech, from the hardness and the structure
"I should have listened to your advice from yesterday" Muz said to himself
"What did you say? You know, for a sidekick, you sure are a handful"
"Are you going to make me regret picking you?"
"Not really, are we going to walk to find Ledge?"
"Nope"
"So how are we going to get to them?"
"First we would have to do research on them in the Magical library"
"Where is that?"
"Not far away from here Felisha" exhausted from answering questions
"Are we there yet?"
"Nope!!"
Felisha continues disturbing Muz, as they both walked away. Looking at them from the top of a building is a hooded person in an outfit like Muz’s own but covered by the shadow of a building, so it’s colour isn’t seen. As the person moved in a swift way, that it almost seemed like he or she disappeared
So, it begins----

SPELLS

it is written and attached