ShadowZero007

Yeah well it may be slightly cliche or whatever but im bored and decided I might as well post it here. For the record in my had I imagine this to have an anime appearence, but I cant draw so feel free to percieve this however you want.

Well the story involves 3 planes of existence. Heaven Hell and The Living World. There is a parallel word to the living world. It is known as the (haven't decided on a name yet) Spiritual Plane/ Latin word for inbetween which ill look up plane/ or the hollow world. Anyway. The only spirits that exist in that parallel world are those who refuse to accept their deaths and desitnations (i.e Heaven Hell).

However the soul also has to be strong enough to resist the will of Heaven and Hell otherwise they will be forced to either place. There is also a more mysterious place which i'll expand upon later. Its the fourth dimension. It is where spirits go when they ie. It is where th creators of the universe exist.

Anyways the Spiritual plane poses a threat. Heaven and hell wage war and as more spirits enter this plane and not Heaven or Hell their armies are weakening. Also the spiritual plane is begging to merge with the living world. That is where the main plot kicks in. There are certain humans who are spiritually aware enough to have one of these spirits enter their bodies and together theyre strong enough to rival demons or angels. When one of these merged people are killed both go to the Creators dimension. As the spiritual flow is thrown out of order, heaven seeks destroy the spritual plane completely even though it will cause masive damage to the living world. While hell wishes to enlist these merged people as soilders to fight against heaven. Their is also a demonic infulence which has found a way to mass produce these merged beings through forbidden methods.

Yeah thats about it I don't really have any charater desings ect in my head yet. Well what do you think?

*Angel

feels like a mix kind of between X, Bleach, and one more but i forget the name lol.
(^^^ lol ignore that)

the concept is good though, if you could find some one to draw it, this would be much better as a manga though IMO

Jericho's Downfall

this is a cool concept...it reminds of YuYu Hakasho, dunno why...it's good though

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mashowasho

mMm it sounds a little bit too much like Bleach for my liking, but hey - if you can put an original spin on it (and not use the word "hollow"!) then maybe you'll be on to something. I steal ideas from animes - my latest story was completely inspired by Hellsing... but hopefully you wouldn't be able to tell.

PS. Bleach rocks.

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Its Not A Tumaaa

It would work if you collaborate with a Manga artist an just write the script, while he draws.

Also, if Heaven doesn't want this spiritual plane, why did God create it in the first place? Why does Heaven want to "Destroy" it? That doesn't sound about right for "Heaven" to do.

ShadowZero007

Its the thing where people are willing to go to far to save something, or do whats right. Like the robots in I-Robot. There is a god but it exists in the area where the creators are. They etsblished Heaven and Earth. Then they created God and left it to him to create life and fill the universe. Satan (or whatever I eventually call him) was Gods fist and failed creation. He grew jealous at Gods place in the world. Then he follows the biblical story of angels vs angels, and the fallen. The Creators who really are a neutral party and want to see what will happen when all are given free will. The whole dimensin this all takes place in is an experiment to the the creators. They developed hell for they realized there would be those who would poison the Earth. The seperate universe where the lost souls go was a paradox. The souls couldnt exist in nothingnes, so it kind of just developed on its own without the creators.The though of a place existing without assistance from the creators is a dangerous concept to heaven, it is also directly affecting the flow of souls to heaven and hell. Thats why theyw ant to destroy it

stupid_dream

It is slightly cliche, but I still love the idea behind it. If you can add your own original slices to it, it can be an awesome story!

I give the idea a .

Make it good

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