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03-03-2007, 06:58 PM
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Walking on Water (Incomplete Fantasy)
Author's Notes: This is a fantasy story and I really like what I've written so far. It's probably going to be kind of long, as I have multiple story arcs planned. (I've written a detailed 20-25 page outline of the book by hand...I did it in math class, when I should have been sleeping. =P) But dreams are bigger than reality, and right now all I have is one prologue (that I don't like, but I feel like fantasy stories should have a prologue, and anyway the first chapter was too long to become the prologue!) and three chapters.
Help on how to make the prologue NOT sound like a crappy little thing I whipped up in five minutes (because it was actually fifteen, thanks ^^; ) would be muchly appreciated, and so would critique on the rest of what I have. I think I'm going to write this and try to get it published, so I really, really want it to be the best it can be. (Although I am not quite brave enough to post it in Critiques yet!)
Edit: I'm going to have to link to the webpage for this story, (just one page, not a whole site, don't worry), as one chapter wound up being about four posts, which led to a ridiculous amount of replies to a topic that hasd't even been viewed yet. The webpage has a synopsis and a little block of text called "Points of Interest" which basically gives you links to things that are included in the story (for example, I took the Madagascaran myth about the banana tree and death and sort of used something similar in the story, so there's a link to the original myth), if you care. Sorry about that...I didn't think it was that long, but I kept getting errors on my length, so I'm giving you a link instead. My apologies. If a moderator comes across this, please delete my next two posts, as they're absolutely redundant right now.
Last edited by The Gemini Sage : 03-03-2007 at 07:09 PM.
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03-03-2007, 07:00 PM
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Edit: See first post.
Last edited by The Gemini Sage : 03-03-2007 at 07:05 PM.
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03-03-2007, 07:02 PM
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Edit: See first post.
Last edited by The Gemini Sage : 03-03-2007 at 07:04 PM.
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03-03-2007, 09:14 PM
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hmm it looks interesting, but why did the god go and fight the demons? was it for fun, or was there an uprising, please add that inn, and if you want to publish this work, i would stop posting if i were you.
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03-03-2007, 09:33 PM
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well, he went to fight them because they were ruining earth...i guess i didnt explain that clearly
also why do i need to stop posting? =( cant get it published if someone doesnt tell me how to make it better
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