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    Chapter 11 continued...

    The wind flapped at my coat and my hair whipped my face as I sat crouched upon the roof of The Sanctuary – the pinnacle of my home, the countless rooms concealed below the streets. The night was dry; neither a fleck of rain nor a droplet of moisture hung in the air. I raised my head to look at the sky and stars unveiled glittered radiantly back at me. The moon hung like a great white orb in the heavens and showered the land with its grey beams, the city of Asperia lit up as if it were day but for the colours that seemed to be erased by the black sky. Colours; their domain was with the sun. And now, in the night, they faded to give way to the encroaching shades of black and white and grey.

    I did not mind. It had its own beauty. Neon lights here and there defied the darkness but they were too bold, too strong for my sensitive eyes. I kept them pointed towards the stars.

    After the duel with Keenar I had rested, gaining my strength back over a book by the fire in my room. I had then entered the night to find a drunken man directly in the alley where the hidden door was concealed in The Sanctuary wall and received an ear-piercing scream when I had appeared. I quickly silenced him by bearing his neck and sinking my teeth into his skin, my mind being bombarded with a series of life images. He was a nobody; never did an honest thing in his life - beat his wife and son, sold drugs for a living…I dug my teeth in harder until he cried out. He died in bitterness and I had a feeling that no one would miss him.

    I was not sorry for killing the useless underside of the city. They were nothing but dishonest greedy drunkards with no conscience. No souls. But they disgusted me – smelling of sour sweat, alcohol and piss. No Vampire or Werewolf in their right mind would hunt one for food. Just the thought of your mouth coming into contact with such vermin was sickening. But on the other hand no one would miss them. No one. And they only got what they deserved.

    Unfortunately I had an attraction for…wealthier, high-bred blood. And the more handsome they were the better. Healthy, well brought up people tasted better, more nutrients. It was like drinking liquid gold. The ‘nobody’ I had just fed upon was like greasy tap water compared to some of my other victims. And although my parents had, on countless occasions, dissuaded me from doing it, I sometimes liked to ‘play with my food’. I was becoming to accept what I was and even beginning to have fun while looking for my sustenance every night.

    Usually I would go to a club or bar and catch the eye of some young, wealthy man or woman. I would then turn on the charm and let them buy me drinks all night, pretending to be interested in what they had to say while all the while watching them get more and more intoxicated.

    Seduction can be a dangerous weapon and, by the end of the night, it was usually my weapon of choice. I would lead them away to their homes, a hotel room, an alley; anything would do, and painlessly suck their lives from their veins. Unfortunately these people were usually good people; honest, hard working people just looking for a good time. And I paid for it every night by watching their dying memories slide past. So many memories I have inside my head and they are not mine. A Vampire can go insane with it all.

    But that’s the way it was. Call me cruel and heartless. Call me merciful and compassionate. Either way I could not escape who I was. What I was. And some nights you were lucky and others you were not. Tonight, I was not. The man’s neck had tasted of stale sweat and was covered in dirty stubble. I was still disgusted as I stared up at the stars, still feeling the prickling on my lips. But at least my store of magic inside me had replenished and I no longer felt mentally weary.

    A smile curled my lips as I now reached for that store, forming inside my head and on my lips my most treasured spell. Upon that quiet rooftop my concentration was complete and uninterrupted, my mind able to weave the chains of sorcery into intricate patterns that I laced around myself like a glowing cocoon. As the last link fell into place and the word left my tongue, the orb of glowing energy contracted and seemed to draw into me until all light had been sucked into my welcoming body, triggering a series of reactions that were not painful in a way but felt strange nonetheless.

    A dull ache in my bones told me that they were going hollow and I immediately felt lighter, less bound to the earth on which I was standing. New bones were growing in my back and, with them, new networks of veins, arteries, nervous system relays and strong layers of muscle – all attaching themselves to the old ones. They grew out from my back and a loud ripping told me that my clothing had given way. Silently cursing, I mentally noted to remind myself to not wear the coat or to cut holes in it.

    The bones and muscle extended outwards, on and on into the night and, as they did so, the largest feathers I had ever seen blossomed upon them until a formidable pair of wings were protruding from my back. The spell was complete. I regarded my handiwork with satisfaction as the colossal silken feathers ruffled in the wind, almost black but not quite, having the appearance of a dark violet sheen. Access to a whole new area of my brain gave me control of the muscles in my wings and I stretched them wide to their full span – a massive four metres from tip to tip. An image of Orias entered my mind and I smiled. Close enough but nothing could ever match the beauty the Angels possessed.

    I stepped to the edge of the rooftop and peered down to the streets below. Tiny figures crawled along the earth’s surface, bound to it by the pull of the world. They seemed so heavy and clumsy as they plodded along and I knew that, without this spell, I was no different.

    The wind blew my hair about my face and whistled through my feathers. It was calling to me and I smiled as I raised my face to the stars once more. I stretched out my arms and let myself fall off the rooftop, plummeting with ever increasing speed towards the ground. I opened my wings and felt the strain as cool air filled beneath them and I broke out of my dive, soaring effortlessly through the night. A few people raised their heads but my dark shape melted into the black sky and the demonic shadow that was me would be blamed on a figment of their imagination.

    Beating my wings hard, I rose above the skyscrapers and the very tips of the city and found myself in oblivion. It was amazing, a wonder that could only be described! The feeling of being so weightless with nothing but air whistling around me was exhilarating! I closed my eyes and opened my arms wide as I arched and tumbled through the sky.

    An hour of bliss and I was starting to feel the strain. The muscles in my back were beginning to cramp and I was breathing hard from the exertion, my heart beating fast. Calming down from my elated state, I searched for a suitable place to alight. That was when I saw the cloud.

    It was moving at a swift pace and, on such a clear night, was out of place amongst the radiant stars. Alarm bells immediately sounded in my head and my instincts felt that something was very wrong. Hovering as best I could, ignoring the screaming pain of my muscles, I squinted at the whirling black mass.

    Shadows. Shadows like black dust trailed from…an involuntary gasp left my lips…from a hundred skeletal forms. Their wings and lower bodies were insubstantial, disappearing into a whirling gloom of straggling black ash that seemed to be part of them nonetheless. Their skulls and ribcages had the appearance of charred stone and their sharp ripping teeth were ever locked in a skeletal grin, their eye sockets hideously vacant. Adding to my horror and unease, each creature held a wickedly keen and twisted sword made of bleached bone in each one of their fleshless hands. Fear gripped my heart. Hsaru fend! What are these creatures?

    A memory of comfortable chairs and a warm fire flashed in my mind. I could hear Lorcan’s voice as he told me about the various creatures of Naberus. “Gargoyles. Our only safeguard against them is water; their bones will dissolve in it. But if you manage to get one on its own, a blade will do.”

    My hand reached down to the handle of my katana, ever with me even in flight, but there were too many and closing fast. Desperately I reached for the sorcery within, my fingers already tracing patterns in the air. With a force that threw me back, my wings folding around me, a great ball of shimmering water left my hands and shattered in their midst. The Gargoyles that were hit dissolved into nothingness but it was not enough. My spell had taken out five, maybe six of the creatures. A hundred more pairs of blank sockets regarded me hungrily. In blind panic I turned and fled.
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    Not enough people are obsessed with Vampires Either that or my book is getting too darn long to read on the net.
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    Vampires were all the rage until emus came along.

    People still read this, Akroma.



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    has anyone written a story about a gay vampire with a dislike of blood?
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    Hmm. Don't think so.

    It's all yours, Az. Though that vampire won't live very long.



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    "The truth is in the song 'No one lives forever.'" ~ Balalaika
    I am not of your faith, but if a god cannot recognize and reward such love and loyalty, how can he be a god?
    If there are no dogs in heaven, let me rather go to wherever they are.

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    People still read this, Akroma.
    Cheers . What's emus?
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    ...you've never heard of emus? Or the phrase 'emu farm'?

    Emu. A bird impersonating an ostrich. Once thought to replace chickens. I think.



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    "The truth is in the song 'No one lives forever.'" ~ Balalaika
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    Quote Originally Posted by MiloDaePesdan View Post
    Hmm. Don't think so.

    It's all yours, Az. Though that vampire won't live very long.



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    think about it! lol
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    I honestly think your writing is getting better. You're able to write what is more or less olde skoole fantasie (albeit set in a modern world) without it sounding horribly cliched. I'm not sure about vampires with big feathery wings, but it's certainly a break from the norm!

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    *clap clap clap*

    Still as beautiful and as richly detailed as ever.

    I'm still envious of your work and am thrilled by the storyline, the characters, everything! Keep up the good work Akroma.

    Your story rocks
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    *clap clap clap*

    Still as beautiful and as richly detailed as ever.

    I'm still envious of your work and am thrilled by the storyline, the characters, everything! Keep up the good work Akroma.

    Your story rocks
    !!! Thank you thank you! Glad you found your password!
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    Chapter 11 continued...


    Beating my wings frantically I tried to think of something I could do, but my mind was in turmoil and my muscles were tearing themselves apart from the speed at which I was forcing upon them.

    <Raven! Head down towards the city!>

    The voice in my mind made me start and my wings beat out of sync, making me stumble in the air for a moment. Lexan? His voice in my mind was different to that of Keenar’s when shape-shifted. It was as if a telepathic link had been established between us, a connection between two minds. As this thought passed through my head, I felt his presence at the edge of my consciousness.

    <Go into a dive. Do it! Now!>

    I folded my wings tight to my back and fell in a vertical dive towards the earth, the swarm of gargoyles just brushing my heels as I did so. The sudden planar change had gained me a little headway but not much. I could feel them gaining on me, every sense within me screaming danger. Automatically I turned to my source of magic. Fireball? Burst of electricity?

    <Save your energy. Magic has no effect upon them!> I could feel Lexan’s fear, his sense of urgency and helplessness as he watched me plummet towards the city. Too slow. The cloud of bone and shadow descended upon me.

    <They’re on me!> I screamed. My sheath sang as I pulled the blade free, the etchings upon it glowing an angry red. I tried to form a shield about me but my concentration was shattered as skeletal claws raked at my skin and grabbed at my hair. Swinging my katana, I shattered bone after bone but the damage was not enough. There were too many of them! Too many! An intense pain filled my mind and I screamed as they latched on to my wings and started hacking away at them with their swords. Violet feathers tore away in bloody clumps as we continued to fall, their sharp ground teeth chewing on the bones and shredding my flesh.

    Rannest!” I screamed and the pain faded as the spell dispersed itself in a wave of white light. The Gargoyles recoiled, shielding their black sockets with their bony arms and I fell free of the swarm. I concentrated on slowing my fall but I was too exhausted and losing too much blood from countless lacerations. The City was rushing up to crush me and I closed my eyes in defeat.

    Strong arms closed around me and my eyes flew open in surprise. Lexan’s face was mere centimetres from mine, his expression strained as his blue-streaked wings took my weight.

    “They are not through with us yet,” he said in my ear over the wind. Looking past him, I saw the seething cloud of gargoyles fast on our tracks.

    “I cannot carry you. We must land and continue on foot,” he said. “Look for a water source.”

    “Can you not summon the rain?” I asked, my voice shaking. His eyes flickered to mine for a brief moment.

    “No. The nearest rain cloud is miles away – it will not arrive in time. Our best hope is the city square fountain. Now brace yourself and whatever happens, keep running!”

    The deserted streets came rushing up to meet us and Lexan released me. I hit the floor at last, rolled and was up and running within seconds. A flare of light above me told me that Lexan had relinquished his spell and a moment later he was running by my side, flecks of light still trailing from his back as his wings dispersed. The gargoyles followed, wisps of shadow whirling through the city streets. A wave of tiredness washed over me but I pushed it aside.

    “Which way?!” I screamed.

    “Left!”

    I veered left and saw the city square before me, dark, silent and completely devoid of life. The fountain, which usually boasted great dancing spouts of water was a flat expanse of motionless glass. Though only three inches deep, the water would be enough.

    I thought I was running as fast as I could but somehow I managed to run faster. I could feel the chill breath of the gargoyles on the back of my neck and my heart pounded in my chest.

    “We’re not going to make it,” I cried, my grip tightening on my sword.

    “Just keep running!” Lexan yelled and he gave me a great shove towards the fountain. I looked behind me just in time to see him become swallowed up by the hideous cloud and I stumbled in my retreat.

    “Lexan!!”

    There was no reply. I kept running, the fountain so close now. Above the beating of a hundred skeletal wings, I thought I could hear Lexan’s cries. Feeling sick, I blinked away tears.

    At last my boots splashed through water and I delved into the shimmering depths of sorcery. The gargoyles hovered above me, swarming in anger but not daring to come any closer. As I began to form a spell in my mind, Lexan fell from the swirling mass and landed heavily in the shallow water ten paces from me, his clothing torn to shreds. Five of the bleached blades jutted out from his body, some of them having been driven all the way through. Without checking to see if he was still alive, I raised my arms, tilted back my head and unleashed my fury upon those minions of Hell. The water surged upwards in one beautiful, triumphant moment and a hundred dying screams filled my head. I watched with satisfaction as every one of those skeletal horrors disintegrated into dust, water raining down upon me, a manic grin plastered upon my face.

    However, the bleach bone swords that each gargoyle was carrying did not dissolve and my grin quickly faded as over twenty blades, point down, plummeted towards my upturned face. Too fast, too little time to react. I saw those long twisted swords fall; saw the points flash down at my frozen expression of horror…and saw them stop to a sudden halt millimetres from my face.

    What in Hellfire…?

    Breathing hard, I turned my gaze towards Lexan and, incredulously, found him standing, arm outstretched and a hard look of concentration in his eyes as he held the weapons in stasis. The swords were still stuck in his body, some of the handles snapped off, and the water ran red beneath him. A gesture from his fingers and the blades hovering above us fell harmlessly at our feet, clattering loudly in the shallow water.

    Lexan’s eyes flickered and a breath hissed out of his lips as he crumpled to his knees. I ran to his aid and kneeled in the water before him, placing my hands on his shoulders to steady him. His breathing was fast and shallow and precious blood was pumping out of his wounds and dripping off the ends of the blades.

    “Help me,” he said, almost inaudibly as he reached up to the sword lodged in his chest, the end jutting out of his back. With both hands he slowly pulled the weapon free, his eyes squeezed shut against the agony, a gasp of pain escaping his pale lips.

    Hands shaking, I pulled out the second knife that had driven clean through his shoulder blade. It took all my strength to prise it free, inch by slow inch as bone ground against bone, but he never screamed; never cried out for me to stop. The only indications that he was still conscious were his silent gasps and twisted expression of agony upon his face.

    He bears his pain well.

    At last, the final blade was pulled free and the tension left his body, his shoulders sagging and his head slumping forward.

    “Lexan?” I asked softly, still kneeling before him, a hand on his trembling shoulder. He did not reply. His eyes were closed and his breathing was slowing down until it was barely a whisper. Fear gripped my heart as I studied him, and was about to say his name again when I noticed his wounds had stopped bleeding. In fact, they were slowly closing – faster than a Vampire would normally regenerate, and I realised that he was healing himself.

    Patiently I waited and watched in fascination as the lacerations gradually sealed, the torn tissue binding together and scabbing over. A shuddering breath escaped Lexan’s lips, now dangerously blue, and he raised his head with difficulty.

    “I can do no more, I have not the energy. My wounds have been closed but Lorcan will have to do the rest.”

    I nodded and put his arm over my shoulder, helping him to his feet. He winced as we stepped forward and he leaned heavily upon me. Both of us were dripping wet and, resilient to temperature changes as we were, I began to feel the chill.

    “I need blood,” he whispered through gritted teeth.

    “Would you like me to…uh…find someone for you?” I bit my tongue. That was stupid.

    Lexan ignored the foolish question. “The Sanctuary is not far.”

    Alarmed at the frail sound of his voice, I made us walk faster, pushing it a little with the sorcery by levitating us up stairways. At last the ally came into sight and I sighed with relief. Lexan was stumbling and I knew I was close to losing him. Too much blood had left his body and, for a Vampire, that was bad news.

    “We are almost there,” I told him. “Hold on.”

    He did not reply. I did not know if he even heard me.

    Leaning him against the brick wall, I reached through the illusionary spell and commanded the elevator doors to open, half carrying and half dragging Lexan inside. As we descended he began slipping from my grasp. I held on to him tighter.

    “We are here now,” I said, my voice shaking. “Hold on just a little longer…”

    The doors opened and we fell out into the white marble hall. Lexan lay unmoving and panic gripped my heart.

    “Help!” I cried. “Anybody?! Lorcan! Help!” I did not even think to use telepathy.

    Some people came at my pleas for aid, Galahad and Keenar among them, and quickly approached with cries of surprise and dismay at the sight of Lexan’s ravaged body.

    “Gods what happened?” Galahad asked as he listened for Lexan’s breathing. Keenar had her arms about my dripping wet shoulders.

    “It was Gargoyles…I…” Before I could say more Lorcan was amongst us and kneeling over his supine brother. I watched as he closed his eyes, brows knitted in concentration, and laid a steady hand upon Lexan’s chest. Long minutes passed and the silence was absolute as all watched in tense expectation.

    “What is he doing?” I whispered to Keenar.

    “He’s trying to get the heart beating and accelerating the growth of new blood cells in the bone marrow.”

    I stared at her incredulously.

    “Lorcan is a master in the arts of healing. Where others have failed, he has succeeded; and if he cannot find a way, no one will.”

    Beads of sweat were forming on the Werewolf’s brow as he willed his brother’s body to live, to keep running and producing blood as exhausted as it was. Suddenly Lexan coughed and then drew in a great shuddering breath, the hall becoming filled with sighs of relief as his eyes flickered open. I couldn’t help the smile that broke out on my face, the tension within me breaking.

    Lorcan, however, looked far from eased as he bore Lexan up in his arms.

    “Come, Brother," he murmured. "Let us get those wounds looked at."

    “Raven,” Lexan mumbled weakly. I stepped to his side and he looked at me with tired eyes. “Thank you,” he said before closing them and letting his brother carry him across the hall and down the spiral stairs where they disappeared from sight.
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    That chase was really something, definitely got my heart pounding! Poor Lexan, I rather imagined him looking like a pincushion when he got all those swords stuck in him

    There was only one bit that jarred me: "If he can’t do it, no one can" reminded me too much of a cheerleader chant. Uuuurggh.

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    I'm saving this spot to give you feedback after I finish reading the whole thing(printing it out since it's less eye kill that way )

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    "If he can’t do it, no one can" reminded me too much of a cheerleader chant. Uuuurggh.
    AAAAAAHHH! You're right!!!! Must change!!!

    (printing it out since it's less eye kill that way )
    Lol I know what you mean - my eyes hate computer screens. I have a printed version at home for friends and family to read. Can't wait to get it properly published and printed!!!! ....Yeah like that'll ever happen!
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