Thread: Raven (Vampires, Werewolves, Demons, Angels!)

That was great! I read all the way through it today, and I have to say, I am utterly amazed!

Can I start off with a negitive comment? Rather a comment, generally speaking, about fantasy that doesn't branch off from the realistic world: I hate it. But this, this is well wrought. I love the way you begin with the snow, giving it a fantasical tone to lead on with but you're still describing something so many of us understand. Great beginning, Akroma!

Hey, everyone. Sorry I'm really doing a bad job of getting this story down aren't I? Wow I haven't posted anything in..like months!!! It's just that Easter was busy as hell and my last term this year has been a neverending barrage of lab sessions and projects. But the light at the end of the tunnel is growing brighter and my last two projects are in for this coming friday....then on that weekend I'm going to see MEGADETH!!!! And that'll be in London.

After that I have an entire four months of summer holiday until my last year of uni starts in October! So during that time I'll hopefully get my muse back and get this story out!!!

Hope everyone's ok and enjoying the sun!

ok. i'll be frank. i haven't got the time to read all of this (sorry about that but i really am busy) so i'll just ask what i want to know. only two questions,
Who is the evil ones out of Vampires and Werewolves?
Who are evil/good out of Angels and Demons?

I haven't read it all yet but what I have read I've enjoyed very much. It reminds me of the Underworld movies which are my favorite movies! I'm excited to see where this goes!!

Blimey it's been ages since I posted here!!! Sorry, guys this term's been REALLY busy! Exams, stupid projects, and even though I've been itching to write more I've just had no time.

Who is the evil ones out of Vampires and Werewolves?
Who are evil/good out of Angels and Demons?

Well, let's see...all the Vampires and Werewolves are good...at the moment, and they worship and were made from a good God "GOOD GOD!!!" called Hsaru. They are at war with Demons and scary gribbly things from Hell (or Naberus) and they are made and ruled over by the bad God Vorrac!! Yay for cliche!!! So Raven and her trusted buddies, Keenar and Galahad, get to fight monsters and keep the evil forces that are trying to take over the world at bay.

Raven has also just become an adept in sorcery so now she can kick butt along with Lexan and Lorcan - the clan leaders. Woot!! And now that I have four months of summer holiday I get to write MORE!!!! We get to find out more about Raven's lover, Sethis, we finally get to meet some big bad uber Demons, our brave night-stalking adventurers get to go on a quest to find a lost God, and at some point they will be wandering round the fiery and twisted streets of Naberus itself!!!

Ooooh yes I have it all planned out! MWAHAHAhahah!!!!!!

But first I need to go and sleep. SLEEEEP!!!

Pushed to page four! How embarrassing! Ok, I'm not just being hopeful this time, I'm actually currently writing the next bit so hold on a little longer if I haven't lost you already I'm really sorry my life's just far too busy for bestseller of the millennium at the moment I should be posting the next bit tomorrow night.

I did read a lot of your story.... but it was a LONG time ago and ive lost my point..... soooo i kinda have to admit ive stopped reading. But I must say that what I did read was such excellent writing I wanted more and more!

Keep it up

Cefor

"a shadow flowing like liquid night across the hard stone walls"

i loved that phrase- fuckin braw i tell ye.

good work keep writing =D