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Old 02-18-2006, 08:43 PM   #1
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A Fantasy Story- Intro and Chp 1...please Give Feedback

Sorry moving post to new thread....called A Fantasy Story

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Old 02-18-2006, 08:45 PM   #2
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GAH! that is damn good!!! write more... o_o and hi btw =)
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Old 02-18-2006, 09:06 PM   #3
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Hey bud, I have a recommendation for you, okay. Please do not take this personal, or take it offensively, but I recommend you posting it in shorter articles. This is very long and has a lot of information in it, so, I would recommend that you probably copy and past Chapter Two into another post, and have this one be Chapter One. People have more time to critic it and give a full response to it, and show errors and all that. So, that's my recommendation. If you give me a little while, I'll finish up my read on this and help out however I can.
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