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| Fiction Horror, Fantasy, Science Fiction, Adventure, Thrillers etc. |
04-13-2006, 02:07 AM
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I love the story so far. I hate to see the two siblings die, but it became obvious pretty early that Faybus was a bit evil. I hope he dies painfully.  |
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04-13-2006, 02:13 PM
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#77
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Ink Slinger
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: California
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lol. Thanks for reading and I just want to say that both the siblings didn't die. I'm wondering if maybe you missed the very last part....Elthia escaped death...Faybus, aw, how I love that guy. 
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04-17-2006, 01:43 PM
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#78
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Profound Writer
Join Date: Jul 2005
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I'm normally not a big fan of fantasy (gasp), but since it's you, I thought I would give it a try; I'm happy I did 
Besides the fact giving latin names, but ignoring the meanings of them (Lazarus for example), it was good. You've made a good dialogue.
I'll be sure to read more of this |
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04-17-2006, 01:46 PM
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Join Date: Mar 2005
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Hey, thanks....but I thought it being me you wouldn't read it.
The rest of this story gets better as the parts go, IMO, and depends a lot less on dialogue.
Yeah, Lazarus...*slaps self*...I've heard all about that one...
You're not a fan of fantasy?! *loads Rita (shotgun)*
THANKS! (That's the 293857394875th time in counting) |
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04-17-2006, 01:48 PM
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Nope, I'm sadly not
Sorry, lol, I just can't really seem to let myself go and enjoy fantasy; not my thing. |
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04-17-2006, 01:51 PM
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Join Date: Mar 2005
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It's okay, I'm not a fan of some things too...so don't worry about it. It's weird, as I read more and more I tend to veer away from fantasy, but my writing always stays with the genre. It's just so damn fun to write.
But you can enjoy my fantasy, right?
That means alot to me, BTW, that you're willing to read my stuff even though you don't like fantasy. Oh, and I searched for your story, I don't think you posted it yet... |
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04-17-2006, 02:06 PM
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Yeah, I like your fantasy, lol
And how come nobody ever looks in Writers Workshop? |
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04-17-2006, 02:07 PM
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Ink Slinger
Join Date: Mar 2005
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Oh, that place...sorry, I never go in there...*rushes to workshop*
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