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Old 12-10-2005, 08:04 PM   #1
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http://www.geocities.com/tfperic/embfaith.doc
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http://files.filefront.com/embfaithd.../fileinfo.html

It wouldn't properly format in this box, so I decided to upload it and put it up for download on both of those sites. I just wanted to get some reviews before I write anymore, and see how I'm doing so far. I hope you guys like it
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Old 12-11-2005, 01:03 PM   #2
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That is brilliant! You have to keep writing; it'd be a sin if you didn't. The most I noticed is a couple of typos and some minor grammar mistakes.

I give it a 4.5 out of 5.
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Old 12-11-2005, 07:13 PM   #3
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That is brilliant! You have to keep writing; it'd be a sin if you didn't. The most I noticed is a couple of typos and some minor grammar mistakes.

I give it a 4.5 out of 5.
Thanks Riku! I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and I'll definitaly be writing more soon, hopefully finishing the chapter sometime this week. I really appreciate it
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Um, I can't read Geocities from here*. Mind posting it?


*Not easily anyway.
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Old 12-11-2005, 09:29 PM   #5
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Um, I can't read Geocities from here*. Mind posting it?


*Not easily anyway.
http://files.filefront.com/embfaithd.../fileinfo.html

I uploaded it to filefront, so all you have to do is go their and get it. I hope that helps!
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Old 12-11-2005, 09:31 PM   #6
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Cool! Thanx!
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Old 12-16-2005, 12:38 PM   #7
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Cool! Thanx!
No problem, and tell me what you think of it I'm always looking to improve my work.
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Old 12-16-2005, 02:37 PM   #8
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I really liked this Raistlin. Great job! Can't wait to read more from you!
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Old 12-25-2005, 06:06 PM   #9
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I really liked this Raistlin. Great job! Can't wait to read more from you!
Thanks! I'll put the first chapter up really soon
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