writerprincess15

When it all comes down to it, it is up to you. The people i have met here seem very nice..but you never know who you can trust over the internet, no matter how nice they seem. I'd say, just do what makes you feel most comfortable. I might delete my story to..but i am not sure..i mean..should i?
Anyhow, if you do delete this from here, could you maybe email me the rest of your story or something because i really really like it alot and i want to see what happens? If not that is fine. If you want my email adress just click on my name and it will come up.
Catch ya later! Hugs!
Writerprincess15 aka Terra

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I don't know. I think I will. I probably will delete all the chapters uptill where I am. Just as a safe guard, even though my work is copyrighted. For you, Terra, I would say, If you want your work to be published, I would do the same. I would say, go ahead and delete the chapters uptill chapter Five. That's getting rid of Chapters One through Four. The whole thing would still contain Chapter Five, Chapter Six, and when chapter seven comes out, delete chapter five. But that's just my thoughts.

And if I do delete my story from WF. Don't worry, I'd send it to you.

Later Terra.

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writerprincess15

Yeah, i think i am going to delete mine to. Just for safety.

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"I honestly think it is better to be a failure at something you love then to be a winner at something you hate."

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Hey Terra, I’m going to send you my chapters to my story over the e-mail instead of over Writing Forums because of safety issues. If that’s okay, please tell. Oh, and if you start to delete your story, then send yours to me over e-mail please. I still really like it.

As you may have noticed I haven’t figured out how to delete posts so all I did was deleted the text. I feel stupid. (Which lately has been happening very often. )

Anyway,,,

Later Terra!

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writerprincess15

lol. I dont know how to delete either. So i am going to do what you are doing to. But i think i have to contact one of the moderators and then they should know what to do. Anyhow, i told you in a different post it is ok for your to email me. I will email you back with a review and more of my story! Catch ya later! Hugs!
Terra!

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Mystery

Deleting posts is resticted to use of moderators, if they believe it is uncalled for or breaking rules, they will delete neccessary posts, you cant do it because there would be mayhem hehe.

Anyway oasis, Im also interested in reading your story, could you please tell me if you can send it to me? Thanks.

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writerprincess15

he he. i am actually rethinking over my decision. I may post more of my story here..but i have to think over that alot first..so anyhow, oesis i have received your next chapter and i just read through it all and i really really love it. I will email you my full full review very soon along with my next few chapters of my story! lol! Hugs!
Terra Ann!

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"I honestly think it is better to be a failure at something you love then to be a winner at something you hate."

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Mystery - Not a problem, PM me or e-mail me at d_kingland@hotmail.com

Terra - Okay, I'm waiting.

Later guys

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Readers, this post will explain more of why I am making a cancellation of my story, there being only one or two reasons why.

Reason One: Unfortunately, I have safety problems with my works and feel it is necessary for me to elapse my work.

Reasone Two: Unfortunately, my story exceeds PG13 after Chapter Three. Chapter Four contains horrific content and dialogue much not suitable for readers below the mature stage or of great understandence (which I know isn't a word) of what is actually going on. Persay, language unsuitable for children under the age of eighteen.

I did not notice my work was unsuitable for younger readers until a few days ago. There for, if you have already been reading my story and/or really want to read it and you don't really care for the explicit dialogue, then my e-mail is below.

Thank you.

Oasis Writer

d_kingland@hotmail.com

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READERS - There my be a relucktet return of Angels of Aurora 2, if I can infact get it approved by the mods.

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Okay, I think I got an okay about reposting my story. I will get to work on reviving my work on Writing Forum. The love will continue

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Seagoon

Hi Oasis!

I saw your story from your sig and thought I'd read it, and I'm glad I did. I'm not sure if you still want critique on this bit but since it's the only bit I've read so far, it's all i can comment on

I really like your style. Repeating ideas, like the walking, works well, although I felt at times that you repeated other words a little too much. But that's just my opinion.

Your use of relatively short sentences gives a lot of impact and makes it different to anything else I've read recently. If it were me I'd put in one or two longer sentences to emphasise certain point, but it's not me, so do what you want!

I've not tried posting any of my work on the forum yet (though hopefully that will change) so I'm not sure if there's a standard font. If there isn't, since the typeface is so small, using a simpler font with no serifs and decorations would make it easier on the eyes. Just a suggestion.

I enjoyed reading this and I'm definitely going to read more, when I have the time. Sometimes work just gets in the way.

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Oasis Writer

Hey Seagon. I appreciate all th nice words. I really do. But, I would like to say, and this isn't pointed at you, but for the forum more or less, that I'm deleting this thread. My story will be in my sig, right, but this one is older and I've made too many changes to it. So, thank you, very much, but this one is gonig to be a deadthread, okay. Thank you for reading through, whoever looks through, but read through the ones in my sig, not this one. Thanks.

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