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Old 10-03-2004, 01:04 AM   #1
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Book 1 of Leelee's Adventures(Fantasy) Chapter 6

Chapter 6:The Suprise, The Battle, and The Strang Bottles
"Where are you taking us?" Leelee cried as she still continued to squirm in the Greeber's clutches.
The four friends had tried to escape but as you can guess the Greeber's had caught them. And now each of them were being carried down the pitch black hallway by a Greeber.
And they were anything but comfortable in the Greebers clutches. The Greebers skin was extremely slimy and scaly!
"To a door." The Greeber snarled, tightening his grip painfully around Leelee. Leelee shuddered in disgust.
"And..umm..what is behind that door?" Sheryll asked, swatting at her culprit's arms.
"A Suprise!" The Greeber's cackled together, and the Greeber that was carrying her swatted her back.
Leelee gulped, she really did not like the sound of that.
Before the four friends could ask any more questions the Greeber's had halted and the leader of them who was not carryng anyone opened a door.
Light streaked out and blinded them. They all groaned and tryed to sheild their eyes.
The Greeber's cackled enjoying their pain and entered the room, closing the door behind them.
And as their eyes adjusted to the light the four friends gasped at what they saw.

"What do we do now?" Marah cried.
"We must keep moving.." The King said.
"Look sir i know you want to find your son and all..but i really dont think we should go any further." Greg said, placing a comforting arm around the shaking Marah.
"Get your arm off of my sister you old perverted sick..."
"Jason shut-up!"
"Marah you stay out of this.."
"Jason i am already in this! And you do not need to be so overprotecive all of the time.."
"Yes i do! You are my baby sister..and he is a sick idiodic.."
"I am not a baby! And stop insulting my boyfriend..."
"Sick! Do not call him that! He is way to old for you and.."
"News flash Jason, he is my boyfriend and i am going to call him that.."
"Not if i have anything to do with it.."
"You wont..and if you keep acting so stupid you wont have anything to do with my life!"
"Oh..and what is that supposed to mean?"
"It means that..."
"AGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"
At that moment the ground seperated in such a huge gap that everyone including the Coodunzees fell into darkness as the ground came back together above them.

"Who are you?" he asked staring at them.
"Who are you?" Leelee asked him back, although they all could pretty much guess who he was.
He was blue, had gold hair, had gold eyes, and had a purple robe on. He was sitting against a corner in the small dimly lit red room.
He was very clearly the kidnapped prince. He was very clearly..
"Su. My name is Su."he said.
"Su, we know your family!"Robby exclaimed. "They are.."
But just then the Greebers painfully threw the 4 friends into the room and against the wall then they left the room before anyone could get a glance at them and locked the door shut.
"You better pray your friends can fight!" A Greeber cackled.
"What is that supposed to mean?" Mark asked as they all sat up and rubbed their heads.
But the Greeber was gone, and now it was just the five of them stuck in that room.

"AGHHHHHH!"
They all continued to fall until..
POOF!
They'd landed in a blue lighted room on a comfy blue couch. The room seemed big enough to be 3 times bigger then a living room.
There was one door facing them all and in barely seconds that very door flew open to reveal the Greebers! But not just a few of them..no. There were at least hundreds of them flooding into the room and staring at the Coodunzee's.
The children felt disgusted as they took in the Greebers features.
The Greeber's were very odd looking. They had green and black striped skin. They were crouched over as though their backs were broken. Their feet were paws and very huge. Their arms were like the T-rex's. They were small arms that had sharp claws at the fingers of the hands. They had no nose and one small mouth that had sharp knife like teeth spread inside. They had long green tungs. Their eyes were huge and glowed a pure red. And their ears were almost as big as their heads.
And now, the leader of them stepped infront of them, eyeing the king.
The children huddled behind the king and queen in complete fear.
"I'll be ok." The king whispered to his wife and the shaking children before he went infront of the Coodunzees. Now he and the leader of the Greeber's were facing each other. Their eyes seemed to hook with fury.
"Finally we meet again." The King Greeber cackled evily. "And finally we can take what should have been ours all along. I hope you are prepared for a battle Rolernd."

"So..now what is going on?" Su asked.
The four friends had just finished telling him about everything that had happened,
"I have no idea." Leelee said. "I just hope everything will be ok."She looked very close to tears.
"Oh please dont cry!" Su begged. "Besides, i have something that i know will cheer you up!"
And just then he pulled something out of his pocket that made Leelee bawl tears of joy.

"A battle?"
"Yes, and here are my terms. If you win, you get back your son and everything goes back to the way it was. If and when we win we get to come out from this stupid forest and you have to live here!"The king Greeber now smiled and waited for The King of the Coodunzees to reply.
"Well, that seems rather foolish of you, seeing as i have much more fighters then you do!"
"Well, Rolernd my Greeber's have many more strengths than your Coodunzees do."
"We shall see about that."
"Yes we shall. So then are you saying you agree to my proposal?"
"Let the battle begin!"

"Oh my god! Where did you get this!" Leelee exclaimed taking her necklace out of Su's hand and placing it around her neck.
"Well..it was when the Greeber's had let me come outside from this underground world of theirs. They had me get them some rocks..its what they eat..so i was out looking for rocks and out of nowhere this falls out of the sky and clonks me on the head. I almost just left it on the ground..but then i thought that it could be important..so i kept it.."
"Oh thankyou thankyou thankyou!" Leelee threw her arms around Su quickly and Robby stirred uncomfortably.
Leelee smiled and leaned over by Robby.
"Is somebody jeolous?" She asked.
"No! N..no! I..you see..i.."
But as he stuttered Leelee leaned further over him and kissed him on the cheek. He blushed and smiled as she pulled away and took his hand in hers.
"Thankyou again." Leelee said, looking now at Su as she twirled her necklace with her fingers of her free hand.
"Oh..no problem."Su said.
As Leelee, Robby, and Su heard a sniffle from somehere they looked around the room. They discovered that Sheryll was leaning her head on Mark's shoulder and she was crying silent tears. Mark had an arm around Sheryll and was doing his best to comfort her.
"Sheryll..dont worry." Leelee said kindly."It'll all be ok."
"B..but my brother.." Sheryll stuttered. "The last thing i said to him was that maybe Mark and Jason had a point and that he was to old for Marah. After i said that he seemed so angry with me. And..and now that i think about it it is none of my business who he dates..but..but i never got to apologize! And what if..what if.."Sheryll could only bawl at this point.
"Sheryll, Greg loves you. And he knows you love him. And besides, there is no need to speak as though you will never see him again. That is just foolish. We will make it out of here and everything will be ok!" Leelee was determined to cheer Sheryll up.
"I know..but what if.."
"NO! No buts and no what ifs! We are going to be ok!" Leelee said this so strongly that she almost belived herself and Robby squeezed her hand to show how proud he was of her.
"I just hope everyone else is ok..wherever they are." Su said.

"Are..are you sure about this?" Marah asked the King as he came over to prepare for battle.
"Dont worry." The king smiled at her. "We will all be just fine. I have a plan." And he lowered his voice as he continued."You see that hallway there?" they all looked to the hallway to their left and nodded. 'Well it isn't guarded right now. As soon as we start to battle i want you all to run down it and leave the queen and me here to battle. I want you to try and find your friends and my son. Then try and find a way out of here. Ok?"
"B..but what about you?" Ja asked her father. "And mother?"
"Your father gave you orders." The queen said strictly. "Now do as he said."
"Yes mam."Ja said quickly. "Just be careful..ok?"
"We will..now go as soon as the battle starts. " The king said.
They nodded to show they understood and then the King turned to face the Greebers.
The Greebers were standing behind their king and their eyes seemed to glow with impatiantness.
"Are you ready Rolernd?" The Greeber's king asked. "Or are you to chicken to fight us?" The Greeber's laughed loudly behind him.
Ignoring them the King Rolernd spoke up. "I am ready whenever you are!" He yelled.
"CHARGE!" The Greeber's king screamed unexpectibly.
King Rolernd gave a look to the children that told them to run now, and then he turned to face the charging Greebers.
"CHARGE!" he cried, while Ja, Jason, Greg, Marah, Chester, and Mu ran to the hallway. Marah looked over to see that no one had noticed they were exiting the room. And just as they exited the room and entered the pitch black hallway they could hear a huge deadly crash as the Greebers and Coodunzees ran into each other. Immediatly they could hear screaming, yelling, growling, ripping, and many more sounds.
"My mother and father!" Mu said, trying to turn around and go back to the battle room.The others stepped infront of her, blocking her way out.
"We must follow your father's instructions."Chester said.
"But.."
"No buts!" Ja cried. "Lets go!" And with that Chester and her each grabbed her sisters arms and lead the way down the hallway.
"I hate not being able to see!" Marah cried, grabbing Jason's arm with one hand and grabbing Greg's hand with her free hand. Luckily it was dark. Jason couldn't tell his sister was holding Greg's hand.
So they contined on, with Ja and Chester dragging Mu in the front and with Marah clutching her brother and Greg in the back.

"So what do you think happened to the others?" Sheryll asked. She still was leaning on Mark's shoulder and Mark still had an arm around her, but she had calmed herself down for the most part.
"I really do not know.." Leelee replied, still twisting the necklace in her hand. "Maybe..maybe they are still up above the ground..or maybe the are trapped..i just dont know.."
"I hope they are ok..."Sheryll said.
"Oh I'm sure they are." Robby said. "The Greebers had more than enough chances to kill us all..but they didn't. For some reason they want us alive. Maybe to get the King to do something..i'm not exactly sure why.."
Mark suddenly thought of something. "That jerk Greg had better not hold my sister's hand or...."
"Mark, if Jason is with them i am sure Greg will not be anywhere near Marah." Leelee said.
Mark smiled.
"That was not a complement!" Leelee snapped. Mark's smile faded. "Now Mark, i know you love your sister..but you have no right to be all up in her business."
"But.."
"Just listen to me! Do you want your sister to live her life alone?" Leelee paused and let this soak into Mark before she continued. "Mark, you know she will be with someone someday..do you want that guy to be Greg who is one of your best friends. Or do you want it to be some guy you do not know? Now dont answer me..just think about it."
Everyone remained silent now as Mark let the words sink into him.

"Where are we?" Marah asked, still clutching Greg and her brother.
"Now do you really think we'd know that?" Chester asked.
Before Marah could reply Mu angrily swatted at Chester and Ja. "You can let go of me now!" She cried.
"Umm.Marah..about before.." Jason began.
"No need to apologize." Marah said. "It's just good to know that you've done some thinking and have finally come to your senses.."
"Me apologize! You should be the one to apologize! You had no right to say that i.."
But suddenly Ja hushed Jason and Marah and pointed ahead of her. And as they all followed her gaze they gasped. What they saw made Marah and Jason forget their argument..at least for the moment.
Off down the hallway a ways was a door that was wide open. Such bright light was streaming out of it that you could not see into the room.
"Should we.."
"Umm..well yes..i mean..umm..well..you know..Leelee and them could be in there..so..i think we probably should.."
"SHERYLL..LEELEE.." Greg yelled out all of their names. There was no answer.
"They could be unconsious in there...we should go there just incase.."
They all agreed. And so now they all huddled close together in one crowded group as they slowly crept towards the mysterios room.

"Rolernd..are you sure about this?" The Queen asked.
She and her husband had found their way to the very rear of their fighters and had been watching as the battle had begun. Some of the Greeber's had been killed, and their black blood had splattered the floor. But many more Coodunzees lay dead with their white blood splattering the floor.
And as the Greeber's made their way slowly to the king and Queen the King and Queen held hands.
"I have faith in our love and i have faith in this." The king told his wife. "You know that i only have a few lifes remaining, but you..you still have 20. If they come over here..i want you to let me handle them and you run after the children.."
"No Rolernd..i am staying at you side.."
"Hey! I told you what i want you to do! Now promise me you will do it!"
"Why do you always have to be the hero?"
"Just promsie me!"
"But..."
"Promise me!"
"Ok..i promise. But you still do not always have to be the.."
"Thankyou."

"What was that?" Su asked as they all heard screams faintly off from another room.
"I dont know..b.but it sounded like there was fighting going on..." Robby replied, placing his arm around Leelee who's eyes had just lit up with about all the fear they could handle.
"Oh my gosh! Do you think the Greebers and the Coodunzees could be fighting?" Sheryll asked.
"That must be it..and that is why that Greeber told us we should pray our friends could fight..and i bet they kept us alive because they wanted to fight for us..but not just for us..for the kingdom to..that has to be it!"
Everyone looked at Leelee in suprise at how she figured that out.
"Hey, i read alot of mystery books, so sew me!" She cried, snuggling closer to Robby. They all smiled at her.

"What do you suppose is in there?" Marah asked.
They were now very close to the door. Just a few more steps and they would be inside.
But in seconds Marah's question was answered.
Just before they stepped in the room many thoughts swam around in their heads about what they were about to find. But what they did see shocked them so much that their hearts nearly stopped beating and they (for what must have been the millionth time) gasped.
Standing right there in the middle of the room with it's back faced to them was a short creature that had green and black colored skin. It was drinking from a huge bottle that had purple stuff inside of it. And this was just one of what must have been millions of bottles that were spread around tables in the room.
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