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    Life's Cannonball

    Life's cannonball it's critical mass "if you will" and it's flying at your face. Can you sense life's cannonball as it heads towards you closing in between your eyeballs as you focus to hard and disregard ? As life's cannonball heads your way I'd say duck if you please and open your eyes to see. There's the world in the very least. Life's cannonball is made from steel just for you. Made to send YOU to ITS beyond. Life's cannonball is fast and straight maybe it was made for a target or simply a far hit. Is life's cannonball true ? Let it hit you then maybe you'll see through and through. As for me, I would like to know where life's cannon is and if I can't find it I'll just find what is along the way as others stay. Do you have faith in the cannonball's path ? I don't but rather in my own. Who shot life's cannonball ? Maybe I'll find them and see if want to shoot too.

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    I can't decide whether you've been sniffing the loco-weed or have just made a very profound statement.
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    This is an interesting statement. It makes me think, but at the same time makes my head hurt, though not in a bad way. I'm intrigued enough that at some point in the near future I will be walking down the street and start thinking about "Life's Cannonball".

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    Interesting, but was distracted by why there is a space before each of your question marks.

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    Some of the sentence structures, for example the first, do not make sense. I found the concept inaccessible and think more work is required.

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