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About LinkBacksThe edited version sound much better. Some of the words you used in the newer version made me imagine parts of the scene that weren't there before.
Btw, I like you closely and densely pack in as much detail as possible in one sentence. Nicely done!
The edited version sound much better. Some of the words you used in the newer version made me imagine parts of the scene that weren't there before.
Btw, I like you closely and densely pack in as much detail as possible in one sentence. Nicely done!
Sorry I don't have anything helpful to say. I just want to say I LOVE IT.
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