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  1. 05-27-2011, 03:07 AM #1
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    i like this. is it just a piece or part of a 'hood novel'?
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    part of a novel thanks
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    Quote Originally Posted by geewizz View Post
    part of a novel thanks
    i'm normally not a fan of urban based novels as I work in a jail where everyone refers to them as 'hood novels' and they seem to be the only thing around to read. But i really like your use of first person narrative. I write in first person most of the time.
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    nice. it was my first try at first person narration, but i love it. thanks
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