I'm posting this in order to get some feedback on what I posted in the thread at http://www.writingforums.com/writing...t-dilemma.html. General feedback would also be much appreciated. Before continuing I should note that there is some coarse language and sexual themes. At this point, it's already on the R-Rated level. If that bothers you, please do not read any further.
Chapter One
It was generally believed that men did not live anywhere except the island, even though Ghabus always said that they all came from somewhere else beyond the sea. Because it wasn’t relevant to any immediate concern, this precept was largely ignored, and eventually forgotten by all except for the daydreamers and others regarded as “touched”.
This being the case, when Rak cast off from shore, he didn’t even think about what he saw wrecked on the rocks of the cliff north of the docks. It was much larger than the small fishing boats used by any of the villages on the island, so even though it was so obviously out of place if given a second glance, the first glance didn’t even give him pause for thought. Besides, his thoughts were on the weather.
Rak glanced down at the hairs on his arm which caused tiny bumps to form across his flesh. He told himself it was nothing. He told himself that the older fishermen would surely be the first to point out his suspicions if they had any truth to them, even though he knew that the truth was that if he was right, the older men would be even less likely to say anything. To talk about early winter was to talk of bloodshed.
He shook his head and reminded himself that it was nothing, just goose bumps. It didn’t mean anything. But even as he told himself this, he made a mental note to spend an extra hour fishing that night. It didn’t help his worries that the oldest fishermen had left an hour early that morning. He remembered old Ianco the night before sitting on the dock watching the approaching darkness on the horizon. Ianco was the oldest fisherman still pulling in his own nets every day. He was always quiet, but in an easy way. Last night was different. None of the other men approached him, but all of them spent almost as much time casting sideways glances his way as they did tending to their various evening duties. Rak didn’t like it. He didn’t need to be told in so many words what was on everybody’s minds.
Rak blinked sharply, and frowned. Nothing was on anyone’s mind, he reminded himself and turned his attention back to his skiff. Once he was out a reasonable distance, he cast his nets. He sniffed as he sat down in his skiff. He promised himself that he would think about something else. His mind remained blank for a few minutes while he searched for a new subject to put his attention on. He thought back on that mess of wooden planks on the rocks he saw on his way out and wondered what it was. It was too large to be a skiff, but at the same time, it looked like something manmade. It was almost as if someone had built their house on the cliffs overlooking the rocks, and then just pushed it off, but that was ridiculous.
He started to wonder if maybe he should have checked it out before coming this far out and casting his nets. For a moment, he considered pulling his nets in and having a look, but decided against it. If it were anything to be worried about, one of the other fishermen would have noticed it and already checked it out on their way out. Besides, he had promised himself he would try to get as much fishing done today as he could. This thought brought back the worries about the weather. He ran his fingers through his light brown hair and thought to himself that it would be a long day until something else happened to ease his fears.
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Rak had lunch before pulling in his first net of the day. He opened a basket of cold potatoes and onions fried in fish oil left over from dinner the night before. Next to it was a large water skin he’d been sipping on all morning. Even with the chill in the breeze, the late summer sun could still cook a man who didn’t pay attention to how much water he was drinking. If he was lucky he might make it back to shore just to find himself kept in bed the next couple days before being let back out to resume his duties. More than one fisherman had lost his life to a calm sea because he wasn’t paying attention to his own needs and turned loopy. The thought made him chuckle when he remembered the first time he went loopy in the summer sun.
He finished his small meal, kneeled in the center of the skiff and stretched. Feeling renewed, he pulled in his net. Salty, cold seawater misted his face as a dozen herring struggled against the pull of his net. The net won as it cleared the water. He dumped the silver fishes into a chest at the stern of his skiff, then unfurled his single sail, and set course for the dock to unload his first catch.
As he approached the dock, he watched the sunlight play on the curves of the waves. For a moment he was lost in this visual display and was grateful for this moment of peace of mind. Not a moment after he recognized the moment as peaceful, he remembered the worries that plagued him on his way out that morning. He glanced off to the rocks below the cliff to the north at the wreck he had seen on his way out, wondering if anyone had checked it out yet. He felt goose bumps on his arms again, but this time it was not from a chill in the wind. Billowing in the wind behind the wreckage was what looked like a giant white sail. He had no idea what material it was made of, but the way it moved in the wind against the rocks made its purpose unmistakable. The wreckage was obviously too big to be a skiff, so he had a hard time admitting to himself that it was obvious what he was looking at because he’d never seen anything like it.
Rak thought for a long minute. Those rocks could easily tear a hole through the bottom of his skiff if he wasn’t careful, but the more he looked at the wreckage, the more he was alarmed by its alien design. He glanced back to the dock, and considered asking for the assistance of one of the older, more experienced fishermen, but he hated the idea of raising an alarm if it turned out to be nothing.
He thought a moment longer and decided that he had already made his decision. He turned the skiffs rudder to starboard to make a wide arc to bring him alongside the wreckage. Getting as close as he dared at the moment, he furled the sail and coasted by with the wreck a half dozen yards on his port side in order to get a better look. It looked like a ridiculously oversized skiff at first glance. It was about ten yards from bow to stern. It was hard to tell how high it was because it was propped up on an angle on the rocks, but Rak estimated that it would be six yards high at the bow and eight at the stern. The hull on the bow had collapsed and now carried the eerie appearance of an exposed ribcage. Its rudder had been ripped off, and its three enormous masts were snapped off as if they were branches on a tree after a strong wind storm. The sails hanging from its mangled masts were of a material that Rak had never seen before.
Rak pulled away and dropped anchor. He didn’t want to drop anchor too close because he might ruin his skiff on the rocks. There was only one thing to do, and that was swim. He ensured that the anchor was set, then blew some air into his water skin to provide some floatation before putting the stopper back in. He slung the skins strap over his shoulder, then dove into the water and waded to the wreckage, careful not to get too close too fast. It was a mild weather day so the waves were not too high. He navigated over to the North side of the rocks where he knew them to be smoother than that jagged rocks by the wreck. He carefully found his footing on the slippery rocks under the water and slowly hoisted himself up to the rocks above the waterline. He didn’t dare relax because he knew that one large wave would take away any traction he had gained from climbing above the waterline.
Carefully he made his way over to the cliff side of the wreck where the water was shallower and the waves didn’t hit so hard. Debris lay everywhere he looked. The starboard side of the structure was completely torn away from the bow halfway to the stern. He saw that there was just enough of an opening that he could make his way inside.
He paused outside the structure. His blood pounded in his ears as he considered the implications of this discovery. He had never even heard of a structure like this, but from what he could tell, it was not something newly built by some mad dreamer. This had to come from beyond the sea. He had always been told that there was a Land Beyond the Sea, but like everyone else, he thought that it was a metaphor, like when Phayas talk about the hunting grounds in the sky they go to after they die. It was a place of plenty, a paradise that men were cast out of for some transgression. But everything about this structure screamed that it came from a literal land beyond the sea. He hesitated a moment longer, knowing that if he took a single step inside, his world would become infinitely more complicated, and then he ducked into the structure.
It was sweltering inside. It was too dark to see at first, so his first experience with this world was the smell of rot. He coughed, then took a few deep breaths to get himself accustomed to the smell. He gagged as the effort nearly bested him, but eventually it wasn’t as bad. His eyes adjusted to the dark and he took in his surroundings. He found himself in a small room that from all appearances looked like a storage room. Wooden boxes were strewn haphazardly across the bottom of the structure, collecting on the starboard side due to the angle it was propped on. Many contained food that had spoiled in the heat and moisture. The floor sloped at an angle, which made it difficult to keep his footing.
Rak climbed to a doorway on the opposite side of the room. The door had been forced off its hinges by some jarring force. He climbed past the door and into a hallway spanning the length of the structure. Halfway down the hallway, a giant wooden pillar went from floor to ceiling. From what Rak had seen from the outside, he ventured that this must be the bottom part of the mast that he had seen. Doors opened on each side into rooms the same size as the one he’d just come from. At first, they seemed to be storage rooms filled with various tools, ropes, and massive sails. These gave way to living quarters as evidenced by the racks of mattresses they contained. Several were missing or destroyed, but Rak counted that the rooms must have been able to contain up to twenty beds in total.
Towards the stern end of the vessel, there was a stairway leading up. Rak made his way towards this feature, and upon reaching it, found that behind the up staircase, there was one leading down to a level halfway filled with water. His reflection on the surface of the dark, green waters looked like nothing so much as a corpse, causing him to shudder. The smell emitting was unbearable. Rak knew that he could not bear to brave those waters. Instead, he climbed the up staircase.
At the top of the staircase, there was a platform surrounding the opening the staircase created. The ceiling was broken apart in places, allowing jagged knives of light to show through to the walls. A particularly large slash of light fell across an ornately carved set of double doors before him. Rak had never seen such fine woodworking, which looked nothing like the exaggerated features of the wood carvings he was familiar. This door was instead carved in such a way as to capture the true features of the things which the carving was modeled after. The skill of whoever carved this door startled Rak only a little less than the image itself.
Depicted thereon was the figure of a large, fierce bird of prey rushing down on a monstrous creature Rak thought would be better placed in a nightmare forgotten upon waking. The simple fact of its image existing outside of the world of dreams seemed to him a terror and an offence. Demented and inhuman, the creature smiled a curling grin which showed gums without teeth. It’s gaping round eyes were blank and soulless. With one hand, the creature reached up to the bird which rushed on it, while the other hung down to furry legs turned backwards like an animal’s. In its free hanging hand, it held a small disk with strange designs depicted on its face. The designs were all angles and scratches. A similar disk with strange designs protruded from the center, along the seam between the two doors. The design on this second disk was different, however. It was made of flowing curves and circles. Its position led him to believe that this was the means by which the door could be opened, but he failed to test that theory after taking another glance down to the creature.
Rak looked to the other end of the room that he was in. On the other side of the stairs was another door, this one free of design. He made his way around the stairway to the other side and pushed on the door. At first it didn’t give, so he shoved. Sunlight filled the room from the open doorway. There was something soft and heavy obstructing the door, keeping him from opening it fully. Blinking in the light, he investigated and discovered the ashen foot of a dead man. Rak staggered back in surprise and fell back into the room he had come from, pulling the door closed in the process. Losing his balance, he fell with the slant of the vessel against the wall of the room, knocking his head on the wall.
Rak’s head swam for a moment or two. Once the swimming stopped, and all that was left was a throbbing pain, he emptied his head of thoughts and just counted the moments until the pain lessened to become bearable. He looked toward the door and thought of what lay on the other side. He regretted being in this position. In order to move forward, he was faced with death on the one hand, or a nightmare on the other. He considered going back for a moment. He would love to let someone else, someone much braver and more experienced, conduct this investigation instead. He had almost convinced himself when he became aware of a morbid curiosity working away silently in the back of his mind. He couldn’t think of any good reasons for feeling compelled to see this through, he surely didn’t want to, yet he knew that is what he was going to do.
So the dilemma presented itself. Should he choose the path to death, or the path to chaos? He absently philosophized like this for a moment, delaying the moment when he would be forced to act. Eventually he decided to move to the path to the dead body and come to the other door later. Taking a deep breath to steal his resolve, he stood back up and opened the door.
He looked the other way as he stepped through the doorway, pretending that the dead body wasn’t there. He was now outside on a floor covering most of the vessel. It was bordered by railings, presumably to keep one from falling off into the water. Between where he stood and the bow of the structure, there were several low structures, the purpose of which Rak could not guess. At the bow, the floor was raised about a foot and a half above the rest of the floor where more strange structures and devices were located. He investigated this floor for a time, finding little more than ropes and strange objects unknown to him. He found where the enormous mast had protruded from the floor. It had snapped off at a point approximately fifteen feet high. Rak thought that it must have taken an entire tree to build a mast that size.
Finding nothing else of interest, Rak looked back at the door he had come from. The body looked much like a pile of rags, and he pretended that’s all it was. He noticed that on either side of this door was a ladder leading to a floor higher still. He approached the one of the left as it was further away from the body. He climbed till he could see on top. That floor also had the remains of a mast protruding from the floor. Sprawled in front of the mast, like a damp rag thrown to the floor, was another body. This one was smaller than the first. Rak closed his eyes and grimaced, then hefted himself another two steps on the ladder to get a better look. It was a boy of perhaps fifteen years. He was shirt and shoeless, wearing only a pair of loose trousers of light material, torn off just below the knees.
Rak judged the floor to be in no condition to walk on and instead climbed back down. It was apparent that he would find nothing but death out here. The only place left to investigate was behind the nightmare door. Without looking at the body, he opened the door and stepped back inside. Observing the nightmare door again, the thought struck him that perhaps the bird was not rushing on the creature, but instead preparing to land on its outstretched arm. The face of the creature, now seemed not so much to be grinning in glee, but to be grimacing in sorrow.
Rak wondered how he had seen it has he had before, but was then further amazed when he continued to look at it and the attitudes changed again. The bird seemed ready to fly higher, rather than coming down, while the bizarre face looked nothing so much as jovial. Yet it was clear that nothing in the image had physically changed. The mystery of this door and whoever had crafted it so masterfully refused to yield any secrets, only more mysteries.
Left with nothing more to ponder, Rak focused now on the seal in the center of the door. Once more he considered leaving the door unopened, and going to retrieve someone much more qualified. He even considered pretending he had never made this discovery. This thought dwelled for awhile as he faced the door, his eyes tracing the lines in the carving. He blinked in the heat and realized that he was getting very sleepy. He wobbled a bit, then started as he was overcome with an inexplicable sense of urgency. He knew that he must open the door, and he must not wait any longer.
Without bothering to rationalize this feeling, he reached out to touch the seal, finding it warm to the touch, he was encouraged to proceed. He gripped the seal, than pushed in. Both doors swung slowly, but easily inward, contrary to how one would expect a door to open when at an angle. Rak heard a faint clicking sound under the floorboards near each hinge, but thought little of it.
Inside was a short hallway which opened into another room lit by a window on each side and two on the far end of the room. The room was very different from the others he had seen. The furniture was modest looking, consisting of a bed, a dresser, a long table whose chairs had fallen to the starboard side of the room along with other odds and ends. A smaller table had been turned on its side in the far side of the room. Red carpet covered the floor, muting his footsteps. Mounted on the far wall between the windows was a large disk with the same design as the one on the door to this room.
Rak was distracted from his observations by a sound which, although familiar, he would not expect to hear in this situation. He held his breath and listened again to make sure he had heard right. Behind the table on its side came the wheezing sound of a very sick or very exhausted man. With this realization, his chest began to pound.
Slowly, he tiptoed over to the pile of trinkets that had fallen to the starboard side of the room to look for something he could protect himself with if it came to that. Most of the items he saw were useless even as a clubbing device, but the glint of metal caught his eye. Protruding from a long, curved device was what looked to be a knife blade with a rather large handle with a metal bowl attached to the top and bottom of the handle. Whoever had fashioned this sparkling beauty certainly had a talent for blade forging, but he didn’t care too much for the handle, which looked much larger than necessary. Still, it would work. He took the blade in its device as quietly as he could and began to draw. To his surprise, the blade did not end at a foot. Pulling the rest of the way, he found that the blade was the full length of the device. Bright and wicked looking, it was the longest blade he had ever seen.
With the blade held stiffly before him, he approached the table, and the man he knew to be behind it. He approached and inched around the table. The man he found was barely conscious, and in very bad shape. Blond shoulder length hair spilled out around his head on the floor like a halo, and a beard of the same color adorned his face. His clothes were strange. They were dirty and worn, but the tailoring was magnificent. His body was that of an active man, although it was apparent from that he had lost weight from the way his clothes hung loosely from his limbs. His blue eyes would fix on Rak for only a moment before glazing over and lolling back again. His skin was dry, which along with his lolling eyes, told Rak that he was beyond loopy. If he didn’t get some fresh water soon, this man from across the sea would die.
In spite of his condition, the narrowness of the man’s gaze expressed an intense pride that was rare among the men that Rak had known, outside of his brother. Rak lowered the blade to his side, as this man obviously was nowhere near a threat. The man focused on the lowered blade then back up to Rak’s face for a moment. It seemed an understanding had passed between them, if not necessarily on a conscious level.
The moment turned awkward, so Rak broke the silence. “Can you speak?” The man said nothing, but his eyebrows raised a fraction, indicating that he had heard. Rak set the blade on the floor and approached the man slowly, so as not to alarm him. At first a hint of alarm crossed the man’s eyes and his body tensed. This passed to near frenzy when he saw Rak remove his water skin from his shoulder. He grabbed for the skin, but it was withheld as Rak cautioned him, “Slowly.” The man shut his eyes in despair for a moment, then nodded in understanding. This skin was passed to his hands, and he pulled the stopper and took a small gulp. The water was warm but revitalizing, and his rasping gave way to more healthy sounding gulps of air as his throat was lubricated by the life giving liquid.
Catching his breath, the man took another small gulp, savored, then another. Having restored a small amount of strength, he touched is forehead and murmured something. Rak cocked his head to the side indicating that he didn’t understand what the man said, and the man just waived him off in dismissal and laid his back on the floor. In moments, he was asleep.
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It was sunset by the time Rak’s vessel pulled into the docks with the stranger from across the sea in tow. Several hours had passed and the man was still unconscious. He breathed heavily, but when Rak tried to rouse him, he merely groaned. Even after water was poured on his forehead, the stranger slept. Rak knew that he would have to get him to his village healers quickly, or he may not last the night. There was no way of knowing how long he had gone without water so it was best not to take chances.
The dock was deserted when they arrived with the exception of Ianco who had resumed his vigil at the water’s edge. The chill remained in the air, and the wind, which had picked up since this morning in spite of a cloudless sky, made it impossible to ignore. Ianco saw Rak’s approach and came to greet him and catch his line, at which point he saw the stranger laid out on the bottom of the craft. Ianco hesitated before pulling the skiff in, staring for a long moment at this stranger, then another long moment at Rak. No words were said, but Ianco’s gaze said that he wasn’t entirely sure he shouldn’t shove him into the water, then let the currents take the skiff where they may. Rak waited patiently, meeting Ianco’s gaze, but offering no protestation against the hesitation.
Finally, the awkward moment passed. The old fisherman sighed, and pulled in the skiff and tied it off with a resigned look on his face. Rak passed the fish chest up to his friend, who set it at the end of the dock, and returned to help the younger man transfer the stranger from the boat to the dock. Then he spoke, “He needs water. When did he drink last?”
Relieved to finally share responsibility with one so much more experienced, Rak smiled in thanks, “He had a swallow or two just after midday. He’s been unconscious since.” It had taken Rak all day to construct a crude platform in order to safely transport the sleeping man from the wrecked vessel, over the rocks, into the water, and to the skiff.
Ianco looked off to the north, where Rak knew the wreck to be just out of sight, showing that he knew where the man came from and no explanation was needed. “We better get him up to Cherri.” He left the dock to enter a small hut on the beach, emerging moments later with a device made of a length of cloth attached to two poles used for carrying those who couldn’t carry themselves. The old fisherman laid it next to the stranger, and then both men lifted the third onto the device. They lifted the poles, then they set off towards the trail towards their village.
The path was steep, but both men had walked it more times than they could count, so they had no trouble. It wound back and forth up the mountainside. Birch trees rose on all sides, with ferns providing ground cover. The rising wind caused the birch leaves to crackle loudly, but the men remained silent. After the last of the sunlight had gone, they began to slow, picking their way carefully on the uneven trail. As familiar as it was, there were enough roots and stones embedded in the earth that could be hazardous if they moved too swiftly, doubly so due to the load they carried.
At last, the trees began to thin, and the ground began to level, signaling they were nearing the village. They could hear familiar voices through the birch trees and the smell of food wafted through the cool air. They passed Ianco’s home, and his son, Iama, was out in moments. Not pausing, or even offering an explanation, the old man told his son, “Go down to the docks, and get Rak’s fish chest. Bring it back to the smoke house as fast as you can.” Iama only wasted a moment narrowing his gaze on the strange cargo before rushing off to fulfill his father’s request.
Rak knew Iama well. They were the same age so they had grown up together, and remained friends since. They were closer than most because of Iama’s temperament. Rak had never been remarkable in any way accept that he had been especially curious as a child. This wore on the nerves of those older than him to the point where they would lose their patience with him, and as a result, he was particularly wary of invoking the criticism of others. As for his peers, they liked him no more or less than any of the others.
Iama, on the other hand, took much after his father, but not his easygoing ways. His hair and beard were so dark a shade of brown that it appeared black unless in direct sunlight. He was quiet, and his brow was always furrowed into a scowl. As a child, he would never play with the other boys, but would sometimes watch at a distance. {Note: Find a smoother transition to flashback. Also, necessary or distracting?} Rak had been the first to approach him and ask him to come play when they were children, and when he did, Iama looked away sharply, then ran off in tears in full view of all the other boys. They had been shocked, and denounced him as a coward and an outcast. They never again allowed him to play in their games.
Rak, however, was too curious to accept this verdict without further investigation. That same evening after dinner, he came to Ianco’s hut and asked about his son’s whereabouts. Ianco directed him with a gesture to a rocky outcropping overlooking a severe drop off behind his home. Rak was able to spot him through the trees sitting at the edge of the drop off, nudging small stones over the edge. Rak approached loudly so as not to startle him, but as he approached, the darker boy turned his body away.
When Rak arrived, and he took in the full view that was displayed before him, his breath left his lungs in one long exhalation. All the features displayed before him he had seen enough times to ignore them, but that had been up close. Seeing this panorama of the slopes of Gamas with all of the familiar features visible from this one point in space was almost overwhelming.
Rak remained silent for a moment until Iama demanded, “What do you want?”
Snapping out of his reverie, the boy replied, “I just came to find out why you didn’t want to play.”
“Why do you want to know?”
Rak was taken slightly aback by this question, but he thought for a moment, then replied, “Well, all the boys play except you. I thought maybe you didn’t know how, but we could have taught you…”
Iama cut him off, “I know the rules of the game. I’ve watched you play it enough to figure them out. But you don’t play by the rules, not always.” Rak gave him a questioning look, so Iama continued. “When you play your games, you all break the rules that you make up. And sometimes the others call foul and sometimes they don’t. I’ve figured out for myself what’s supposed to happen, but I can never really tell what’s going on. It’s too confusing. Why don’t you just play by the rules you make up?”
Rak shrugged, “That’s just how we play the game. I never really thought about it.”
Iama snorted, “Well, you should play differently, and you should think about it.” He was silent then. Rak waited to think of something to say, but nothing came to him. So instead he waited, and watched the light fade. Finally, after what felt like a very long time, he said, “Well, goodbye.” The dark boy didn’t react.
The next day, the boys got together to play, but Rak stayed off to the side. When the others asked him why he wasn’t playing, he lied and said he had a sore knee. They shrugged and kept playing. Rak watched the games in a new light. He started to notice the way the rules were being enforced or not enforced as the case may be. He started to wonder why a rule may apply in one case and not in another. Then without any warning, the leaves beside him crunched, and he found that he had a companion. Iama didn’t say anything, and neither did Rak. They just watched.
After the games ended, Iama left without a word. The other boys gave him questioning looks, but didn’t say anything about what had transpired. The following day, Rak again sat out of the games and watched, and again Iama joined him silently as they watched then left just as silently after the games were over. On the third day, the same thing happened, but then Rak broke the silence.
“I think the bigger boys are breaking the rules more than the smaller boys. The smaller boys never win, but whenever they break a rule everyone gets mad at them. The bigger boys always win, but nobody gets mad when they break a rule. When anyone else breaks a rule, whether someone else cries fowl depends on who notices.”
Iama replied, “You do it too you know.” Rak only nodded. Looking back at this memory, Rak could identify that observation as the beginning of the end of his boyhood.
As Rak approached the home of Cherri, the healer, he wondered if the discovery of this stranger would mark the completion of the end of boyhood. Rak had for a long time felt a growing restlessness. He couldn’t shake the impression that he had somehow missed some important step in growing up, a step that all the other young men his age had reached long ago. Maybe that was why he was the only unmarried man of his age with the exception of Iama.
Cherri exited her hut just as the litter carrying the stranger touched the ground. She was a small, slender woman, but carried herself with power. If a man twice her size caused her or her patients any trouble, she could silence him with a look and a low voice, a trait she had honed from raising six sons over the years. She had been called a great beauty in her youth, and in her advancing age, the beauty was dulled only slightly. Dark hair fell just short of her shoulders framing a face that was kind in spite of the jaw which looked as strong as those of most men. Coal black eyes surveyed the scene before her.
“Get him inside,” she said in a voice that was pleasantly gravelly. If she had any thoughts about this strange man’s origins, she gave no indication. Once he was gently laid on the patient bed in her hut, she shooed the men out as she began applying her craft. Ianco left in the direction of his home, and over his shoulder said, “You should eat and rest. Tomorrow will be a very long day for you.” Then he was gone.
It was dark enough that nobody in the village had noticed the strangeness of their deposit, and Rak was grateful for that, but he knew that once word got out of what happened, there would be those who would be outraged by Rak’s actions. He couldn’t be as certain if he would have any supporters. Cherri would advocate for her patient as long as he remained a patient, he knew. Ianco may possibly support him, but just because he had helped Rak carry the stranger up the mountain didn’t necessarily mean that he approved of his actions. Iama was a loyal friend, of course, but he carried his own opinions just like his father, and he could go either way.
Rak’s biggest challenge would be his brother, Wonen. His older brother was a Shaman, and although he had no other official role in the village, he had taken an unofficial advisory role with the village’s Witan. Rak could admit that Wonen was as intelligent and as capable as any, and he afforded his brother all the respect due to one in his position, though he felt that his brother was more critical than was needed. They had nearly come to blows over more than one disagreement over the years, both before and after Wonen was taken into the Witan’s confidence, and none of those occasions came close to matching the gravity of this one.
Rak crossed the village to his own hut. He had built it four years earlier when he had reached the age considered by the laws of the tribe to be the age of manhood. Tradition held that all men were to build their own hut when they reached this age, but in practice boys would usually supervise the construction by the tradesmen. What this amounted to was keeping the workers fed while the lead carpenter made all the important decisions. Rak, however, had been raised by a carpenter and was familiar enough with the trade to both supervise and do much of the work himself. Upon completion, his father told him it was a shame he didn’t follow his father’s trade, but Rak’s only brother was a Shaman, and he had no uncles, so there were no fishermen in the family until Rak. As a result, even though his father was well respected, the family went hungry on more than one winter when the generosity of neighbors grew sparse.
Stepping inside his home, he began working on building a fire. While he was grateful for the anonymity the darkness had provided earlier, at the moment he wished he could see what he was doing. After a great deal of fumbling, the kindling caught, and within minutes, a cheery fire lit the front room of his small home. Minutes later, the door opened and in came Iama with Rak’s fish chest. He set the chest down, then took the chair opposite from his friend without being asked. Each took a gutting knife from the table in front of them and began gutting the fish and throwing the entrails into a bucket meant for that purpose.
“So, who was he?” Iama was the first to break the silence this time. Rak slowly laid the story out without enthusiasm, but leaving nothing out. With his friend, Rak had to be careful not to mislead him in any way whether intentional or not. Iama had no patience for boasting, nor for avoidance of serious issues. Typically Rak could get away with saying less than was needed, but for things of this magnitude, he knew that if he left anything out, his friend would catch the hole in the story immediately and demand an explanation.
Once the whole story was told, they both remained silent for another minute, until finally Iama again broke the silence. “You better practice ducking now. Tomorrow, a lot of people will want your head.” For the first time since that morning, Rak smiled.



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