Hello, Im going to just post the first half of what I have. Let me know if you want more. Enjoy...
Part 1: A Dream Of White
A boy around the age of twelve stood in an empty room filled with brilliant white light.
If one tried to guess how large the room really was, they could not tell. It could be infinitely large or just a small room, thus leaving the mind free to wander off to infinite possibilities.The boy wandered aimlessly around the room with only the sound of his feet echoing around him as he continued forward. He had not walked to far when he stumbled upon a vacant pair of chairs. They were the same brilliant white everything else seemed to appear to be.
“But is this a dream?" he thought to himself as he stared at the chair across from him.
Unfortunately, the boy did not have much time to contemplate this. It seemed that he was not alone in this strange place. In the distance the sound of footsteps echoed toward him. A girl came into view, with the appearance of being close to the same age as the boy, she wore a short white dress, showing just the bottom half of her legs. Her hair, an almost silver color, fell just behind her, a little past shoulder length. Her brilliantly shaded green eyes stuck out against the white background.
The girl smiled gently at the boy and sat in the chair adjacent to him.
“I`m glad to see you are well, and progressing at that.” She spoke coolly and sweetly to him as she closed her eyes and gave a small smirk only to reopen them abruptly.
She stared across the room at the boy and finally gave a half smile after a few moments had passed.
“Well? someone such as yourself… should not stare.” She grinned once more and continued with
“You know, it is not very polite…” Finally, after looking away, breaking his glare at the girl he spoke what was on his mind.
“Do I know you? Where am I? What is this place?” All of his questions seem to flow out of him all at once, preventing the girl from answering just one at a time.
She signed and turned her attention elsewhere, flicking her hair to the side as she did so.
“I half expected you to ask so much, so quickly. Just filled with questions as usual…” She answered, reluctant to answer any of his questions that he had previous asked.
I realize this could very well be riddled with errors... If you feel the need to point all of them out for me please do so! I encourage constructive criticism!