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Old 05-08-2008, 08:24 PM   #1
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Article I am thinking of publishing

These are my personal views on the creationism vs evolution argument. I am thinking of getting this published but I don't know where yet...


Theory the First: God Does Not Exist

There are so many animals and other organisms that interlink and work together in so many ways (not to mention incredibly complex) How could He have made all of them in just six days? there is no way that is possible. Also if He exists then why did He make disease and sickness? Couldn't He just stop it all if He created all life then doesn't it stand to reason that He could take it away? Or if He does exist I have seen no poof of it. There have been no occasions of Him talking to a human like He did in the Old Testament. Or if He does exist maybe He just doesn't care about us anymore.

Theory the Second: God Does Exists But He isn't All That He Is Scrapped Up To Be.

Ok, lets assume (no arse joke here please) That God does indeed exist and He did create life. I have a simple question: What if God made us over a long period of time? A LONG six days? And by "Creating man in His own image" means that He made man to create. After all, that is what He does right? Create?

Theory the Third: Where Did God Come From?

Where did God come from? Mostly we were all told that God created the earth all life and man. Well, we also learned that before that the earth didn't exist. Well then Where did He come from? Are you really saying that God was always there? That He is Infinite? That seems hard to explain, always being there...to me at least. So where did He come from? This also goes for the Big Bang Theory. Was the Primordial Atom always there? If not then where did it come from?

Theory the Fourth: Creationism Is Just A Hoax

Maybe thats what it is. A hoax. An explanation to what lies beyond death. If you are good you go to Heaven which is all that is nice and beautiful. Disobey, and you go to Hell, for infinity burning in the flames and being tortured by Satan.

Maybe thats just what it is. That simple. Sometimes in life things are that simple. I myself have often wondered what lies After and I just couldn't imagine not being able to think..or see...Maybe thats what the people long ago thought.
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I'll be very honest...With all due respect, no publisher on the planet will ever even consider publishing this, not because it is badly written or makes no sense, but because the ideas expressed have already been documented in so many forms of the written word, that what you have to say here is about as far from original as you can possibly get. Millions of people have expressed before you the ideas put forward in this piece of work...and in far far greater detail too.. (think an entire book)....This is nothing new or even enlightening, and reads more like a teenager's homework assignment than something that would be considered for publication. Sorry to be a downer, but that's the honest truth.
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I agree with ZachMcqueen. And, a lot of those questions are small, equivocal and amature-ish in nature. I am not, by any means trying to down you, but it's the simple facts. And a lot of those questions would be answered for you if you were to seek them out; do a little research. You'd be surprised what you can find.

(I don't know if this is out of place, but maybe I could help? From a Christian stand point, that is. I can answer a few, if not the majority of those questions for you; that way, you have a feel for the Christian view of things. And in-depth if you would so like.)

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Ow. Owww! The temptation to hijack this thread and turn it into a rowdy religion debate is so bad it makes my skull hurt. Ouch! Jeez!
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Old 05-10-2008, 06:17 PM   #5
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Then do that. Use my Theories as focal points for your arguments. I want to see how far out of control this can get before bieng shut down.
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