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Old 04-14-2008, 03:59 PM   #1
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ZombieMart (80 pages)

This is a screenplay in which I have a second draft on currently. I am looking for some outside eyes to take a look at it and tell me what they think needs to be changed/improved upon.

1) It's a zombie movie, although I tried not to make it too gross in the execution.

2) I came up with the idea after watching a string of zombie movies coincidentally over a month long period when my husband and I were dating.

3) Google Docs does not like the traditional screenplay formatting, so I know it's off on this document. But it's correct in the original.

The plot is basically this -- some mysterious virus strikes a town. A woman who was just fired from a Wal-Mart type store is forced to go back with her fiance to save her co-workers from the zombies that they've become. The twist is that the lead character just graduated with a degree in film studies, and knows the cliches and plot points of every zombie movie ever made.

There are a few interesting twists in the story.

I can't post a link yet because of my post count, but it can be found in GoogleDocs under ZombieMart.
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You may get more constructive feedback, if you post this in the appropriate forum.
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Old 04-15-2008, 10:32 AM   #3
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I can't post a link yet because of my post count, but it can be found in GoogleDocs under ZombieMart.
First I don't know you from Adam... so I am not going to go hunt down your story in case I find out that it is a lame suckfest...

With that in mind.. why don't you Plop the first 600 - 1000 words here... and then I'll see if I want to bother myself hunting down the rest of your story just to review it...

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Old 04-15-2008, 11:09 AM   #4
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Try reposting in Scripts section and put a link to your work.
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