Scoop11

This is a screenplay in which I have a second draft on currently. I am looking for some outside eyes to take a look at it and tell me what they think needs to be changed/improved upon.

1) It's a zombie movie, although I tried not to make it too gross in the execution.

2) I came up with the idea after watching a string of zombie movies coincidentally over a month long period when my husband and I were dating.

3) Google Docs does not like the traditional screenplay formatting, so I know it's off on this document. But it's correct in the original.

The plot is basically this -- some mysterious virus strikes a town. A woman who was just fired from a Wal-Mart type store is forced to go back with her fiance to save her co-workers from the zombies that they've become. The twist is that the lead character just graduated with a degree in film studies, and knows the cliches and plot points of every zombie movie ever made.

There are a few interesting twists in the story.

I can't post a link yet because of my post count, but it can be found in GoogleDocs under ZombieMart.

booker41

You may get more constructive feedback, if you post this in the appropriate forum.

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Ungood

First I don't know you from Adam... so I am not going to go hunt down your story in case I find out that it is a lame suckfest...

With that in mind.. why don't you Plop the first 600 - 1000 words here... and then I'll see if I want to bother myself hunting down the rest of your story just to review it...

Ungood.

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lin

Try reposting in Scripts section and put a link to your work.

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