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Originally Posted by Just Jim
You've just described everyone fending for themselves. I know you can't say they're getting eaten. Maybe "The sick and feeble getting nothing"
I won't swear to it, but I don't think crystal is thick-cut. deep-cut, yes.
and you need "a" before thick. "inside a thick cut-crystal glass."
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Just Jim - I overlooked your points, but a late thank you. I've corrected my typo. It's funny now, in hindsight. Dolled. Not quite what I wanted there!
I'm thinking about a re-work of my sick and feeble line because your point is well taken. As is the crystal comment, which I have changed.
I'm going to search for your writing - your avitar makes you look so scholarly and wise
. Like how could I
not take your advice? LOL
