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| Critique and Advice Works seeking critique, advice or assistance. |
12-26-2007, 05:43 PM
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Please give critique to my book " Secret of Dinah " (book about magic, witches)
Three years I have spent of time to collect the information and to write the book about witches. The book speaks about the young girl, which from birth became a witch.
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12-27-2007, 03:57 AM
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Scribe
Join Date: Apr 2006
Posts: 92
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eh?
can you give more information on the plot
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12-27-2007, 04:04 AM
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Join Date: Dec 2007
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Err...
Looks great, from what you've shown us.
-_-
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12-27-2007, 12:24 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2007
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Well I'm sold!
Someone hand me a pen, I wish to purchase your book.
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12-27-2007, 12:57 PM
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Prolific Writer
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: Great Dismal Swamp, VA
Gender: Male
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YOU FIEND! You have stolen my idea, which from birth became a which.
JohnB
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12-27-2007, 02:13 PM
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Best Seller
Join Date: May 2007
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And here I was thinking the original poster had stole my idea.  I thought I was onto a bestseller as well.
Back to the scrap heap it goes. |
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12-27-2007, 04:40 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2007
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I did not steal your ideas
Quote:
Originally Posted by WriterJohnB
YOU FIEND! You have stolen my idea, which from birth became a which.
JohnB
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I did not steal your ideas. I live in Ukraine and I could not know your ideas. That I wrote in my book 50 % the real facts. In couple of days I of the ladies an opportunity to look it is more about my book. |
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12-31-2007, 04:44 AM
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Prolific Writer
Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: In close proximity to my keyboard
Gender: Male
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To point out the blatantly obvious semenyuk12 what writerjohnb posted was a joke. We can not see your story, you have not given us a way to read it.
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CTRL ALT DELETE.
CTRL ALT DELETE.
Damn it, I need to reboot my grill.
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12-31-2007, 04:50 AM
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Best Seller
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: The Forge
Gender: Male
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Any mention of young witches or wizards makes my head hurt, nowadays. I already overdosed on that stuff by JK Rowling...
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