cassie30

As I walk down the street who do I see but Sue who works in the zoo with the lions, tigers and kangaroo. Next I board a plane and who comes down the aisle nut Ryan who makes me smile. As I board the train Marvin coming down the lane.
My journey continues as I walk down the street and meet professor pastern what a quack. Next aboard the train who is that coming down the but Rick who has a trick up his sleeve. On the plane coming up the aisle with a smile is Danielle sweet as can be.
As I continue my journey a strong breeze begins to blow as Margaret D takes the scene. As the train comes to a stop who gets on but professor ianaulle who walks tall but really is small. Sitting next to me on the plane is a girl as spicy as her name. I sit there and wonder is that Ginger.
My journey moves on with me sitting neatly on the train but who is that sitting next me. Could it be Julia my honey of a friend. As I walk down the down the street I hear someone greet me. I turn to see Carol coming towards me.
As I walk down the street who do I meet but Rich who is so shy it makes you wonder why. As I board the plane who greets me but Linda P. on the train sitting next to me is Toni who hates baloney.
My journey takes me to Las Vegas to see funny guy Harry. The train makes a stop but who gets on but Bob who is a slob. I hop on the plane and steward John makes his way down the lane.
Now I make my way down the street and bump into John P. who says woe is me. On the plane I meet a woman named Claire who does hair. On the train I meet a mane named Terry.
As I walk down the street I have to parry and duck because Gerry is giving fencing lessons. Sitting next to me on the plane is Linda B. #1. On the train who comes aboard but Alicia who smiles as she walks down the aisle.
Dancing Lisa dances her way to me like a buzzing bee. Sitting next to me is Linda B. # 2 who works at the zoo with Sue. Now my journey takes me on the plane but look it is Nancy who is fancy.

VNW

You've got something here. I have to admit though that I was thrown by the lack of structure. I normally favor traditional, structured stories and admit I am not a reader of poetry. But, in my humble opinion, you could format most of what you have written into a poem that could be quite endearing. If that is exactly what you do not want, just ignore this post. I admit that I feel out of my element with this type of piece but I wanted to let you know that you captured my interest with your cute and curious characters.