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Old 11-16-2007, 12:24 AM   #1
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Old 11-16-2007, 12:56 AM   #2
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Old 11-16-2007, 01:22 AM   #3
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Old 11-16-2007, 08:18 PM   #4
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Definitly has that young adult feel. You've captured it well.
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Thanks Malone, this is the first time anyone outside my immediate family has been allowed to read anything I've written. I'm fairly serious about this one and I believe the sequel is looking even better.

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