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Old 11-13-2007, 02:32 PM   #1
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Talking HELP!!! CALLING EVERYONE!
I am really stuck... if you go and look in fantasy, under 'Battle of Earth' I need alot of help... I am stuck on how to make it sound like a story.... not a ummmm, I can't think of the word, bu I really need help!!!!!

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Old 11-13-2007, 06:28 PM   #2
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I told you yesterday, and I'll tell you today. Go back and re-write the whole thing, but this time be descriptive.
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Old 11-13-2007, 06:37 PM   #3
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You will not get critique and advice this way, your are asking too much

Why should people have to search for your topic, are you really too lazy to copy + paste ?
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Question ..............
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Old 11-14-2007, 06:34 PM   #5
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Hi RFL,

I'm sure it will all work out when you re-write the story and make it even more descriptive, giving the reader more to look forward to.

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Old 11-19-2007, 03:17 PM   #6
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Thanks Shinn
I hope it will work out!!! I havn't put more on lately i been cery busy lol

yours truly RFL
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