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Old 11-12-2007, 07:54 PM   #1
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Lightbulb United Coalition of Nations (UCON)

The Twenty-Third-Hundredth-and-Fifty-Eighth year has drawn, with it's beginning the Great War ends, showing an imminent stop to the spread of Orcivanism (Religious Communism basically) on Scatter and the growth of once captive countries during the years of the Great War. Of course, with the war ended, slowly with the vast amounts of people displaced and even vaster amounts of weapons and war-waging devices scattered across the shattered battlefields and numerous cities on the continent of Aluerone growing, the UCON is hard pressed to keep small-time local militias, and currently global organizations from smuggling the mass amounts of guns, vehicles, and ammo to emerging ultra-nationalists that have begun dotting the continent. Azrica, the emerging super power has withdrawn the last of it's Armed Forces back within it's borders, leaving numerous garrisons along the Central Island Chain, separating Azrica from the west, the beloved Riley DuGal is ushered in for his second term as Prime Minister, vowing for another prosperous ten years of economic equality and freedom, and with more and more proud soldiers coming home to their family every day, slowly the world seems to be creeping back to the normal, almost idealistic hue of peace it had attained years before the Great War.

Thanks for reading that.

I've finished my manuscript titled "Articles of Combat", a novelization of the brutal war that had lasted from the times 2347 into the late '50's on the planet of Scatter. From a far glance, Scatter would typically be called a class "A" planet, one which can produce life, and sustain it. For proper introductions, Scatter is a much larger planet to it's nearest relative, Earth, having a near 20 times larger girth then our planet. Situated between the some twelve different planets, Scatter revolves around the dual star Borealis, Scatters nearest neighbor is Crawl, a planet similar to both Scatter and Earth. To notify the differences from Scatter and Earth, Scatters first humans slowly began evolving nearly Three-Hundred years prior to any life beginning on Earth, in short, Scatter was born before Earth.

As for the storyline of the large ball of rock, my next series of novelizations will emerge out of the ashes of what has been declared "The Most Sacrificial War of All Time" on Scatter, in short, it was what World War I was, yet with the technological advances, and larger numbers, to us. Onto a contradictory note, Scatters common difference from Earth is the simple advancement of it's people. Technologically, Scatter has taken great strides in the production of top of the line weapons, top of the lines war-waging materials.

Simply put, I'm beginning abrand new storyline once again taking place on Scatter! HURAY! Once again, I am chronicling the advancements of the people of Scatter! And you know what the best thing about it is?


I need help on topics!...
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If I ever found a book like this in the bookstore I'd buy twenty copies.
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Haha, thanks. If it's any advice, it's damn hard to find a publisher, but that is probably because I have the work ethic of an obese Burger King tycoon.
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