_"DICTIONARY BLUES"_ - Writers Forum

mrd00d · 07-27-2007, 12:41 PM

Dirty dishes, broken wishes...fallen arches, nazi-marches...
(Stupid people...)
Ruminate to luminate, communicate & fascinate.
But...._DON'T ASK WHY!!!_.
Be a "sheep-herder", never may you murder.
Justify and never lie, regurgitate, but _never_ hate...
There's such a pogram, in this program.
I propound these thoughts I found, in the flotsam of the jetsom.
High-propriety?
"Rules" of-"society"?
_FOOLS-ALL!!!_ (if you ask me...)
Raped by boredom, in this whoredom.
(go beyond the page)
My prognosis is hypnosis, "hedonistic" not "sadistic".
Monotony....will _surely_ kill me.
For I'm consistently-inconsistent, but that's what makes me, me.
Paradoxical? (Just intoxical.)
Sadomachochism?
_NO_, Bi-polarism...!!! ?
_KEEP_ your "soverienty"...just give to me "philosophy"...
In a twinkling-just an inkling.
For I'm betwixt, my mind is mixed, (like water in oil.)
Making all the pressure's boil.
Meticulous & Scrupulous.
Randomly, I hide from thee.
Memphis, Memphis, Tennesee.
Is someplace Elvis shouldn't be.
Elvis, Elvis, tilts his pelvis.
(What the _hell_!?)
Whine & whine, fix it with twine & some duct tape.
Take _just_ what you need, don't cry when you bleed, move on...
Meretricious & Nutritious, low in calorie...
Redundance _feels_ redundancy, 'cause all this _is_ a part of me.
Think I need some "Therapy"?
For my "creativity"!?
Don't "diagnose", what you don't understand, for _I_ wrote the book on me.
Don't question-just enjoy...(Your welcome...)

© mrd00d aka Brian N. Godfrey

sylvia.cheers · 07-27-2007, 12:43 PM

I'm not sure if this is worthless or just genius...

I'm thinking probably genius.

Sylvia

LBK · 07-27-2007, 01:03 PM

I realize that some of the statements you made in there were more sarcastic than factual. I'm wondering if you really did describe yourself as hedonistic or if that was just a good rhyme. (It was a very good rhyme)

mrd00d · 07-27-2007, 01:04 PM

'I'll try to use smaller words so I don't sound condescending...'

Her rectitudinous behavior snubbed his psychobabble, therefore besmearing it. So appalling the apprehension, her gray matter became a recondite, despondent leitmotiv display of the infinite melancholy, black-bile sadness that IS otherwise known as FEAR itself.

(some more big word rhyming junk)

comments???

mrd00d · 07-27-2007, 01:05 PM

LBK : It was mostly just to rhyme, I wrote this back in college in probably 1993-1994. I will read some of your stuff. Thanks for the comments.