donteatpoop

Ducky Park

Due to the complex structure of the story, it would be impossible to simply post here. This is intended to be humorous, be forwarned: some of the themes and language in the story are intended for mature audiances.

I like what I have finished, but think I need to do a bit more work on the Dastardly Dog branch, and as of yet have not finished the ticket booth branch.

Thoughts on what specifically you liked or disliked would be greatly appreciated. What was your favorite part, or least favorite? I'm also interested in your thoughts on some of the side cahracters. If you catch any glaring spelling errors, please let me know.

Thank you in advance for your help.

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The organ is grinding but the monkey won't dance.

donteatpoop

Anyone? I would truly appreciate your input. From the interaction I've had, I respect your viewpoints, and I've put a lot of work into this. It is not your typical Choose Your Own Adventure type story. Thanks (hopefully).

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The organ is grinding but the monkey won't dance.