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05-05-2007, 06:59 PM
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Join Date: May 2007
Location: In my fantasy world, Draguis.
Gender: Male
Posts: 15
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A fantasy novel by ManaCorp
...Yeah.
Last edited by ManaCorp : 05-11-2007 at 04:40 PM.
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05-05-2007, 08:51 PM
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#2
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Member
Join Date: May 2007
Location: In my fantasy world, Draguis.
Gender: Male
Posts: 15
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No more site for me.
Last edited by ManaCorp : 05-11-2007 at 04:40 PM.
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05-05-2007, 08:58 PM
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Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 113
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Why don't you just post something here for us to take a look at?
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If you add a little to a little, and then do it again, soon that little shall be much. - Hesiod
If I critique you, please return the favor.
Prologue: In The Tower
Chapter One: Feathers in a Hat
Chapter Two: A Wooden Box
Chapter Three: Her Majesty
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05-05-2007, 09:06 PM
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Join Date: May 2007
Location: In my fantasy world, Draguis.
Gender: Male
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Taking it off this site.
Last edited by ManaCorp : 05-11-2007 at 04:38 PM.
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05-05-2007, 09:09 PM
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Join Date: May 2007
Location: In my fantasy world, Draguis.
Gender: Male
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*Before man, dwarves or even elves, four guardians were designated by the gods, to protect the land from anything that may attempt to disrupt the balance. Today there existence is hidden as they hold the four spheres of Syragee, lord and God of all.
Close spawn of the guardians are the forest dwelling race; Tanjuid’s. Said to be born from Draguis’ life essence, their very existence is forfeit if the four spheres go into hands of ill-will. Their appearance is one much like a large lion, they stand upright with grass like hair and are generally surrounded by animals of the forest.
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05-05-2007, 09:12 PM
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Join Date: May 2007
Location: In my fantasy world, Draguis.
Gender: Male
Posts: 15
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Taking it off this site.
Last edited by ManaCorp : 05-11-2007 at 04:39 PM.
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05-11-2007, 04:37 PM
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Member
Join Date: May 2007
Location: In my fantasy world, Draguis.
Gender: Male
Posts: 15
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Still no critque, huh?
Oh well I'm taking it off this site.
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‘There must be some magic in play!’ - Radan
Last edited by ManaCorp : 05-11-2007 at 04:39 PM.
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