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Old 04-19-2007, 02:19 PM   #16
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This is a very easy-to-read style. I know a lot of female friends who would enjoy this - a light, chatty read, on the beach maybe. You know your audience and aim right regarding them.
Not exactly who I was aiming for... but thanks anyways! =)

Trifthen- I did an ambiguous "they" on purpose. It's discreetly referring to how the world sees them as a couple, which is perfect like a fairytale.
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Not exactly who I was aiming for... but thanks anyways! =)

Trifthen- I did an ambiguous "they" on purpose. It's discreetly referring to how the world sees them as a couple, which is perfect like a fairytale.
Well if you wern't aiming for them you nailed me pretty good.
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