Hello Mr Hamburger.
Firstly, although I haven't been on these forums for very long I have found that people who post links to their work on other websites don't do very well in getting a lot of reviews. Use
copy and
paste - it only takes a minute. Literally.
Well, I read the first couple of chapters, and it is actually pretty good. Very good, in fact. I got a strong sense of the protagonist, and there was excellent use of humour. At the end of both chapters there were real cliffhangers to make me want to read on.
Your writing style is taut, exciting and, dare I say it, professional. Punctuation and grammar are excellent.
In fact the only reason I didn't read on is because I have done my job - to review your work - and the first two chapters are enough for me to go on. And I am very tired.
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The thing is, this is my first attempt at fiction.
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I really find this hard to believe.
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I'm writing it via a blog because I know I'm inveterately lazy
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Unfortunate. Very unfortunate. Try snapping out of your lazyness. You are wasted on blogs.
